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2. Many people think that "Today's society desperately needs good examples of education & labor." What do you think about this saying?

2. Many people think that "Today's society desperately needs good examples of education & labor. " What do you think about this saying? gxMkO
Nowadays, people was living in a busy social life and there are many things they had worried so they might didn't want to help anyone expept their family. But there are many people ready to help other in life and they are a good examples for us to follow. You don't have to work big to be a good example, all of good things it had become from little, but it comes from kindness between people. Small action but have big effective to the person who got help. A good examples you can see in our life is the doctors who tried their best to save the patients of the Covid day by day, they are hero in normal life. And there are many other good examples that are helping in quite. Society needs people like them to make life better, life is difficult for us so let's help each other be a good example, a good person.
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. Society needs
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IELTS essay 2. Many people think that "Today's society desperately needs good examples of education & labor. " What do you think about this saying?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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