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Education via lecture and online mode

Education via lecture and online mode D2X5E
As per the topic, it is said that the advancement of technology has decreased the importance of lectures as a way of teaching. I completely disagree with the fact because even though there is a lot of technological advancement, going to college and listening to lectures will always be useful and important. In my opinion, technology cannot replace the need of going to classrooms and gaining knowledge. Because, while taking online classes you might not get the opportunity to ask doubts that occur suddenly and you also cannot be so sure that the technology will give you the exact answer, whereas in the classroom it is easy to clear the doubts that occur then and there. You also have full concentration, as the teacher may not allow you to divert your mind. Furthermore, I believe that learning has to be done together and social contact helps you learn much better than learning alone. When you notice your peers invested in the class and listening to your teacher take a lecture, you automatically get invested in the lecture. Also, it’s much easier to understand subjects when there’s a discussion regarding certain topics with your peers making the subject more understandable. However, technology does help students’ study from any part of the world and also gain information quickly. It can also be very useful for students who are handicapped or who are in remote areas and cannot travel to the cities. There is also no time limit for using technology and gaining information through it. Yet, according to me, lectures in class take an upper hand than online lectures. To conclude, there is no doubt that technology gives students a lot of information, but the important doubts students get can only be solved by the lecturing method. And it also helps the students to acquire good knowledge and perform well.
As per the topic, it
is said
that the advancement of
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technology
has decreased the importance of

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lectures
as a way of teaching. I completely disagree with the fact
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because
even though
there is
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a


lot of technological advancement, going to college and listening to
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lectures
will always be useful

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and
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important
.

In my opinion,
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technology
cannot replace the need of going to classrooms and gaining knowledge.

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Because
, while taking online classes you might not
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get
the opportunity to ask doubts that occur

suddenly
and you
also
cannot be
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so
sure that the
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technology
will give you the exact answer,

whereas in the classroom it is easy to
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clear
the doubts that occur then and there. You
also
have
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full


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concentration
, as the teacher may not
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allow
you to divert your mind.

Furthermore
, I believe that learning
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has to
be done
together and social contact
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helps
you learn

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much
better than learning alone. When you notice your peers invested in the
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class
and listening
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to


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your
teacher take a
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lecture
, you
automatically
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get
invested in the
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lecture
.
Also
, it’s much easier to

understand subjects when there’s a discussion regarding certain topics with your peers making the

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subject
more understandable.

However
,
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technology
does
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help
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students’
study from any part of the world and
also
gain

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information
quickly
. It can
also
be
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very
useful for
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students
who
are handicapped
or who are
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in


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remote
areas and cannot travel to the cities. There is
also
no time limit for using
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technology
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and


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gaining
information through it.
Yet
, according to me,
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lectures
in
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class
take an upper hand than

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online
lectures.

To conclude
, there is no doubt that
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technology
gives
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students
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a lot of
information,
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but
the
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important


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doubts
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students
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get
can
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only
be solved
by the lecturing method. And it
also
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helps
the
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students
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to


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acquire
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good
knowledge and perform well.
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IELTS essay Education via lecture and online mode

Essay
  American English
22 paragraphs
308 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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