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Education System in Nepal

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The education system of many country are quite impressive but when we talk about the developing countries like Nepal then, we have to stop and ask what is going wrong on it. The quality of education is dramatically decreasing day by day. Students are forced to memorized instead of understanding as well as parents are focus after the result no matter what the quality of learning. Being a part of this learning system, i sometime feel guilty of it. The youth are the future of the country. They deserve the right education which enhances and shows the pathway that leads to success. Gaining a right information is so crucial in todays world as it decides what the person will do in his/her career.
The education system of
many
country are quite impressive
but
when we talk about the
developing countries
like Nepal then, we
have to
stop
and ask what is going
wrong
on it. The quality of education is
dramatically
decreasing day by day. Students
are forced
to
memorized
instead
of understanding
as well
as parents are focus after the result no matter what the quality of learning. Being a part of this learning system,
i
sometime feel guilty of it. The youth
are
the future of the country. They deserve the right education which enhances and
shows
the pathway that leads to success. Gaining
a right information
is
so
crucial in
todays
world as it decides what the person will do in his/her career.
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IELTS essay Education System in Nepal

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