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Education provided by government is invariably better than that offered by private institutes. How far do you agree with this statement ?

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Government Institutions are far better than Private institution in terms of providing the best education to the students across the country. Also, Government institutions have many features which help students to obtain better education up to the standards. Body Paragraph: - Providing education and other basic facilities is responsibility of the Government to provide its service across the country. Also Government Institutions not have sole purpose of earning money, unlike private institutions, they provide best education to the students at affordable price so that every student is able to get education irrespective of their finanacial background and any discrimination. The Government Institutes have qualified teachers which help students to get education upto the standards. Body Paragraph 2: - Government Institutions are very well recognised and have very standard curriculum across the country. Also, it covers wide range of education from primary to tertiary education and also covers professional education like engineering, medicine and other advanced studies. Also, it provides scholarships and schemes to help students in obtaining education of their choice. Government Institutions also have physical and sports facilities for students & also it supports students with sports profession. Conclusion: - Overall, Government Institutions have many features over private institutions which provide better education to students with different benefits along with education
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Government
Institutions are far better than Private
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institution
in terms of providing the best
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education
to the
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students
across the country.

Also
,
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Government
institutions have
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many
features which
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help
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students
to obtain better
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education
up to the standards.

Body Paragraph:
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Providing
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education
and other basic facilities is responsibility of the
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Government
to
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provide
its service across the country.

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Also
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Government
Institutions not have sole purpose of earning money, unlike private institutions, they
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provide best
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education
to the
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students
at affordable price
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so
that every
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student
is able to
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get
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education
irrespective of their
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finanacial
background and any discrimination.

The
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Government
Institutes have qualified teachers which
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help
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students
to
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get
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education
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upto
the standards.

Body Paragraph 2:
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
Institutions are
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very
well
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recognised
and have
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very
standard curriculum across the country.
Also
, it covers wide range of
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education
from primary to tertiary
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education
and
also
covers professional
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education
like engineering, medicine and other advanced studies.

Also
, it
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provides
scholarships and schemes to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
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students
in obtaining
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education
of their choice.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
Institutions
also
have physical and sports facilities for
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students
&
also
it supports
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students
with sports profession.

Conclusion:
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Overall
,
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Government
Institutions have
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many
features over private institutions which
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provide
better
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education
to
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students
with
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different
benefits along with
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education
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IELTS essay Education provided by government is invariably better than that offered by private institutes. How far

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
211 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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