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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. nr5o
Education is a key part of a society’s growth and progress that is why it is argued by section of society that institutions should not charge fee from anybody. I largely agree with this statement that human being is born with some fundamental rights and these rights should be entertained equally where reasons behind them would be discussed in the looming paragraphs. First and foremost reason is that, it will contributed in improving the economy as people with good academic and educational backgrounds tend to get well-paid jobs as who grew up poor but educated themselves, have high chances to transform their lives. Moreover, education helps countries to grow economically since it is about getting knowledge and being able to apply it wisely to their lives and at the same time, improving other people’s lives. For an instance, J. K. Rowling struggles as a single parent, before the Harry Potter books which turned her into the world’s highest-paid author. Thus, it will be contributed to decrease in society’s poverty rates. Another reason is that, creating the equal opportunities. To justify it, importance of education in society has always been great as it is irrespective of caste, race, gender, religion. Educated people are treated as equal on the basis of their knowledge and competence. In addition to this, educated people are open-minded and are able to listen and accept other people’s views regardless of the fact of how different they are. In addition to it, education offers a possibility to live independently such as it shelter against financial storms and wrong decisions. Hence, it should be free for every human. All in all, if government should indicate free education it will work as bridging the gap between the community also for maintaining healthy competition in the society which would be fruitful for all.
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is a key part of a
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society’s
growth and progress
that is
why it
is argued
by section of
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society
that institutions should not charge fee from anybody. I
largely
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agree
with this statement that human being
is born
with
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some
fundamental rights and these rights should
be entertained
equally
where reasons behind them would
be discussed
in the looming paragraphs.

First
and foremost reason is that, it will
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contributed
in improving the economy as
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people
with
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good
academic and educational backgrounds tend to
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get
well-paid jobs as who grew up poor
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but
educated themselves, have high chances to transform their
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lives
.
Moreover
,
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education
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helps
countries to grow
economically
since it is about getting knowledge and being able to apply it
wisely
to their
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lives
and at the same time, improving other
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people’s
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lives
. For an instance, J. K. Rowling struggles as a single parent,
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before
the Harry Potter books which turned her into the world’s highest-paid author.
Thus
, it will
be contributed
to decrease in
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society’s
poverty rates.

Another reason is that, creating the equal opportunities. To justify it, importance of
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education
in
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society
has always been great as it is irrespective of caste, race, gender, religion. Educated
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people
are treated
as equal on the basis of their knowledge and competence.
In addition
to this, educated
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people
are open-minded and are able to listen and accept other
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people’s
views regardless of the fact of how
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different
they are.
In addition
to it,
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education
offers a possibility to
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live
independently
such as it shelter against financial storms and
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wrong
decisions.
Hence
, it should be free for every human.

All in all, if
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government
should indicate free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
it will work as bridging the gap between the community
also
for maintaining healthy competition in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
which would be fruitful for all.

IELTS essay Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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