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Education is important or not.

Education is important or not. AjqN3

Education is one nof the most important in human' life especially in this days. Because all opportunities might gives us through education for example high salary job, future career, working high position and others d epends on educationToday, we have more facilities to achieve our goal, firstly, we are living technological century, we can read also read any time through internet if we wont, for this reason may be study is more important. With teaching we can earn money very easy as we expected, because we can choose work any time we wonted and we can cooperate with high salary offices. Secondly, all lightness future bring us through education, if we wont to create our career we read more hardly.

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