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Education is good or bad in future agree or diagree

Education is good or bad in future agree or diagree QlWE3
are much facilitated with machines. Personal use of machines gives people more free time to spend with family and pursue hobbies. Likewise, industrial use of machines reduces manpower for work and increases output. ln the words of Oscar Wilde - "On mechanical slavery, on the slavery of the machine, the future of the world depends. " Moreover, computer machines or robots manage our banks and even the tickets at the airport are issued by machine-robot. The computerization certainly relieves human beings from dull repetitive task without atry human error. What is more, robotic surgery is being done to overcome the limitation of human beings such as trembling of human hands. Microscopic surgeries and eye operations can be better done with the help of robotic surgeons. On the negative side, machines
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IELTS essay Education is good or bad in future agree or diagree

Essay
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2 paragraphs
129 words
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