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Education in the devolpment countries

Education in the devolpment countries OxK3

The most important factor of any nation's development, is the level of education provided to all levels of schooling. for many people, the number one factor of nation's strength is economy, however it have been proven through studies, statistics and many other methods, that to ensure the country's success in all aspect is by focusing on the education first. To confirm the retaliation of high level of education in a country's success, we may observe the main factors and basis of an already successful, and each factor on its own to finally confirm and clarify how exactly the other factors are relaying on education to evolve and participate in a nation's growth.

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