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Economic gap in developed and developing countries

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First world countries are the most developed countries as oppose to 3rd world countries which are least developed. The financial gap between the two sides is increasing with every passing day. I strongly agree that developed nations have an ethical and moral obligation to support the underdeveloped countries in every possible way. It is a known fact that world economy is controlled by developed countries. There exist the forums like G7 which consist of top seven developed countries of the world. Global economic policies are being made during their meetings which drive the world economy. While making the policies at the highest stage of the world, members of developed countries should keep in mind the poverty in developing and under developed countries. The wealth gap between the developed and developing countries can be reduced by making economic policies which are friendly and least hostile towards the developing countries. The policies shall be established for third world debt cancellation, corruption control and investment monitoring and industrial and social projects Apart from the policies, it is also a moral and ethical duty of developed countries to support the underdeveloped countries. A development project in an underdeveloped country will not only provide a way of growth but also create many new jobs for the local public. For these development projects local people skill shall be used. Ownership shall be allowed up to an extent Similarly, Governments and NGOs of the rich countries should provide financial aid in the field of education, health, energy, etc. This will also help in reducing the wealth gap along with the development of the poor and needy nation. In the end, it is concluded that financial and wealth gap can be reduced by making good economic policies, by investing in the development projects and by providing the financial aid. Rich countries and rich people should provide assistance to poor countries and poor people respectively
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are the most
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developed
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countries
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as oppose to
3rd
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world
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countries
which are least
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developed
. The
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financial
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gap
between the two sides is increasing with every passing day. I
strongly
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agree
that
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developed
nations have an ethical and moral obligation to support the underdeveloped
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countries
in every possible way.

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world
economy
is controlled
by
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developed
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countries
. There exist the forums like G7 which consist of top seven
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developed
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countries
of the
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world
. Global economic
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policies
are
being made
during their meetings which drive the
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world
economy. While making the
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policies
at the highest stage of the
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world
, members of
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developed
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countries
should
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keep
in mind the poverty in developing and under
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developed
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countries
. The wealth
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gap
between the
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developed
and developing
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countries
can be
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reduced
by making economic
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policies
which are friendly and least hostile towards the
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developing countries
.

The
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policies
shall
be established
for third
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world
debt cancellation, corruption control and investment monitoring and industrial and social
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projects
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policies
, it is
also
a moral and ethical duty of
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developed
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countries
to support the underdeveloped
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countries
. A
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development
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project
in an underdeveloped
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country
will not
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only
provide a way of growth
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create
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many
new jobs for the local public. For these
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development
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projects
local
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people
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skill
shall be
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used
. Ownership shall be
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allowed
up to an extent
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,
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Governments
and NGOs of the rich
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countries
should provide
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financial
aid in the field of education, health, energy, etc. This will
also
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help
in reducing the wealth
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gap
along with the
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development
of the poor and needy nation.

In the
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end
, it
is concluded
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financial
and wealth
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gap
can be
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reduced
by making
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good
economic
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policies
, by investing in the
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development
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projects
and by providing the
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financial
aid. Rich
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countries
and rich
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people
should provide assistance to poor
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countries
and poor
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people
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respectively
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IELTS essay Economic gap in developed and developing countries

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
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