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As for the third, I think flying by plane

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------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ - We are very pleased to inform you that you are invited to be part of the selection process of our company. - The recruiter said he pleased to inform him that him invited to be part of the company's selection process. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ - Your application shows that you have the experience and qualifications we are looking for. - The recruiter said that his application was showing that him had the experience and qualification they were looking for. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ - The first interview will take place tomorrow. - The recruiter said that him would have his first interview tomorrow. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ - We will send you a link to a Zoom meeting and we will ask you general questions about yourself and what you have learned in your different jobs. - The recruiter said they would send him a link to a Zoom meeting, and ask him general questions about yourself and what him had learned in your various jobs.
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pleased
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are invited
to be part of the selection process of our
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company
.

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The
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recruiter
said he
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pleased
to inform him that him invited to be part of the
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company
's selection process.

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Your application
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shows
that you have the experience and qualifications we are looking for.

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The
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recruiter
said that his application was showing that him had the experience and qualification they were looking for.

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The
first
interview will take place tomorrow.

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The
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recruiter
said that him would have his
first
interview tomorrow.

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We will
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send
you a link to a Zoom
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meeting and
we will ask you general questions about yourself and what you have learned in your
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different
jobs.

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The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recruiter
said they would
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send
him a link to a Zoom meeting, and ask him general questions about yourself and what him had learned in your various jobs.
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IELTS essay As for the third, I think flying by plane

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
160 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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