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East or West, home is the best

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Nowadays, people are more likely to enjoy exorbitant homestay services and luxury hotels but in the end, they realize that: “East or West, home is the best”. According to me, I completely and totally agree with that viewpoint, as now will be discussed. To begin with, home is where we are born and grew up, always saving us from dangers. Clearly, it is a shelter that protects us from numerous natural disasters, threats, pessimistic dilemmas, and otherwise. In other words, those who are away from home every time miss it and have the blessing and thrilling memories, and no matter how away we are, we still want to return home because it plays a prominent part. Besides, home is where we fell by far the cozies and the most comfortable moments. If we look around, it is not four walls made of bricks only, it is more than that. In the house, we have a sense of security and wellbeing, we are able to do everything we adore, play every game we favor, and eat the most appetizing dishes, and we can receive unconditional love. Thus, home is not only a symbol of power and authority but it is a place marvelous things start. In conclusion, home is paradise and the land we belong to, so we must always be grateful for this place.

Nowadays, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are more likely to enjoy exorbitant homestay services and luxury hotels This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, they realize that: “East or West, home is the best”. This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".In my opinionI think
According to me
, I completely and totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with that viewpoint, as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, home is where we are born
 and grew up, always saving us from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsrisks
dangers
. Clearly
, it is a shelter that protects us from numerous natural disasters, threats, pessimistic dilemmas, and otherwise
. In other words
, those who are away from home every time miss it and have the blessing and thrilling memories, and no matter how away we are, we still
 want to return home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it plays a prominent part.

Besides
, home is where we fell by far the cozies and the most comfortable moments. If we look around, it is not four walls made of bricks This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
, it is more than that. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, we have a sense of security and Possible spelling mistake found.well-beingwell being
wellbeing
, we are able to do everything we adore, play every game we favor, and eat the most appetizing dishes, and we can receive unconditional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
. Thus
, home is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a symbol of power and authority This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is a place marvelous things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
.

In conclusion
, home is paradise and the land we belong to, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 always be grateful for this place. 