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Earthworms have a beneficial effect on the physical and chemical properties of soil. Earthworms change the structure of the soil and improve water drainage. As earthworms dig through compacted soil, they ingest the soil and grind it up. They move organic

Earthworms have a beneficial effect on the physical and chemical properties of soil. Earthworms change the structure of the soil and improve water drainage. As earthworms dig through compacted soil, they ingest the soil and grind it up. They move organic 0AaxG

In the set of materials, the reading states that earthworms are useful to the whole ecosystem, while the professor refutes the author’s points one by one by providing supporting details. Firstly, the reading claims that earthworms have beneficial effects on the physical and chemical properties of soil, because they move organic matters, called duff, from the surface and mix it deeper into the soil. On the other hand, the professor asserts that earthworms cause a significant damage to the forests by removing the organic materials from the surface. Forests receive damage significantly from. . .

In the set of materials, the reading states that earthworms are useful to the whole ecosystem, while the professor refutes the author’s points This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "one by".one by
one by one by
 providing supporting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
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Firstly
, the reading claims that earthworms have beneficial effects on the physical and chemical properties of soil, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 organic matters, called duff, from the surface and mix it deeper into the soil. On the other hand
, the professor asserts that earthworms cause Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "significant damage".significant damage
a significant damage
 to the forests by removing the organic materials from the surface. Forests receive damage significantly
 from. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Don't put a space before the full stop.
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