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Each year the crime rate increases.what are the reasons of this .how to solve it.

Each year the crime rate increases. what are the reasons of this. how to solve it. 30Med

Nowadays crime become common problem for nations. Every year the offence amount rises. this essay articulate some of reasons and provide solutions to reduce the crime. To begin with, first and foremost reasons are sale and trafficking of narcotics. To explain it, nowadays people use smoke and drugs. furthermore, they earn black money after sale of illegal product. for instance, these day many individuals have more money because they do illegal business. As a result, these problems become criminals for society.

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offence
 amount rises. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 essay articulate After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the reasons") or simply say "some reasons".some of the reasonssome reasons
some of reasons
 and provide solutions to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the crime. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, first
 and foremost reasons are sale and trafficking of narcotics. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 it, nowadays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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use
 smoke and drugs. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
, they earn black money after sale of illegal product. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 instance, Did you mean "this day" or "these days"?this daythese days
these day
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many
 individuals have more money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they do illegal business. As a result
, these problems become criminals for society. 