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E-readers/e-books are better than printed books.

E-readers/e-books are better than printed books. BLbow
Have you ever thought that technology will affect the book industry? With developing technology, book industry has changed, and readers are divided. In this essay, I will focus on two sides of book industry: E-readers/e-books and printed books. In recent years, many readers have turned to e-books. They prefer e-books because e-readers are small, lightweight and user friendly. Some readers still choose to buy printed books. They find out printed books are nostalgic, collectible, and tactile. E-book readers supports their choice with three arguments: More accessibility, extra features and more eco-friendly. In short, especially ease of use, e-books are better than printed books. First argument’s of e-book readers is “e-books are more accessible than printed books” in three different angles: Price, buying process, ease of use. First of all, nowadays prices is important criteria for readers, especially in my country (Turkey). E-books are cheaper than printed books because e-books cost are much more cheaper than printed books. Besides, readers can find free e-books in the Internet easily. Second criteria is buying process, if you want to buy printed book you should go to book store or waiting the parcel. But if you are user of e-reader, everywhere is bookstore, you can purchase the book from the Internet, download and read it. Lastly, e-reader provides ease of use to readers. E-readers are user friendly because it comes from different features. These are very small and lightweight, so readers can take it wherever they want. To sum up, e-readers are more accessible than printed books. Other argument’s is “e-readers provides extra features than printed books”. E-readers are suitable for reading in different circumstances. Firstly, you can change size of words and brightness, so it helps for eyes. E-ink technology does not tire the eyes. With a backlight, you can read at night easily. If you download a dictionary in your e-reader, you can learn the meaning by pressing of the word. Additionally, some readers have earphone output, thus you can read your book. Secondly, e-readers helps your research. When you want to find a notion, you can easily find that with using a e-reader. If you want to take a notes on your book, you do not need a pen, only use your touchscreen. Although it has many features, its charges lasts for a very long time. In essence, e-readers provides different features, it enhance your quality of reading. Last argument is “e-readers are eco friendly than printed books”. E-readers keep the environment and save the planet. Every year, 15. 8 billion trees have been saved by digital books. E reader that only has 8 gb storage, save 5000 books space in the earth. Using e readers reduce carbon footprint’s. Every printed book leaves 250g-1kg carbon to earth bu e-books leaves less than printed books. All in all, e-reader helps us to save our planet. On the other hand, many readers use printed books, they find more comfortable and tactile it. Readers of printed books love feel the book. Also, they find books smell’s are good, more nostalgic. Printed book readers use the books to socialize. They go to library for learning different things. They think, taking notes on the book helps learn new things easily. In short, printed books may be nostalgic or feels better but e-books have more specialities and it is better for our planet. All in all, e books readers arguments can be listed that more accessibility, extra features and eco-friendly. On the other hand, printed books readers arguments are, feels nostalgic, helps to socialize and taking notes on book helps your learning. Printed books readers arguments are more emotional and dramatic, overall e-readers have mora advance than printed books.
Have you ever
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that technology will affect the
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industry? With developing technology,
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book
industry has
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changed
, and readers
are divided
. In this essay, I will focus on two sides of
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book
industry: E-readers/e-books and
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printed
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books
. In recent years,
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many
readers have turned to e-books. They prefer e-books
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because
e-readers are
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small
, lightweight and
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user friendly
.
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readers
still
choose to
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buy
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printed
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books
. They
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find
out
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printed
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books
are
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nostalgic
, collectible, and tactile. E-book readers supports their choice with three
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arguments
: More accessibility, extra features and more eco-friendly. In short,
especially
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ease
of
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use
, e-books are better than
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printed
books.

First
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argument’s
of e-book readers is “e-books are more accessible than
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printed
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books”
in three
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different
angles: Price, buying process,
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ease
of
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use
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First of all
, nowadays prices is
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important
criteria for readers,
especially
in my country (Turkey). E-books are cheaper than
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printed
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books
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because
e-books cost are much
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more cheaper
than
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printed
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books
.
Besides
, readers can
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find
free e-books
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in the Internet
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easily
. Second criteria is buying process, if you
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want
to
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buy
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printed
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book
you should go to
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store or waiting the parcel.
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But
if you are user of e-reader, everywhere is bookstore, you can
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purchase
the
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from the Internet, download and read it.
Lastly
, e-reader provides
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ease
of
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use
to readers. E-readers are
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user friendly
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because
it
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comes
from
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different
features. These are
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very
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small
and lightweight,
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so
readers can take it wherever they
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want
. To sum up, e-readers are more accessible than
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printed
books.

Other
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argument’s
is “e-readers provides extra features than
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printed
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books”
. E-readers are suitable for reading in
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different
circumstances.
Firstly
, you can
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change
size of words and brightness,
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so
it
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helps
for eyes. E-ink technology does not tire the eyes. With a backlight, you can read at night
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easily
. If you download a dictionary in your e-reader, you can learn the meaning by pressing of the word.
Additionally
,
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some
readers have earphone output,
thus
you can read your
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book
.
Secondly
, e-readers
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helps
your research. When you
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want
to
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find
a notion, you can
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easily
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find
that with using
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a
e-reader. If you
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want
to take a notes on your
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book
, you do not need a pen,
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only
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use
your touchscreen. Although it has
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many
features, its charges lasts for a
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very
long time. In essence, e-readers provides
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different
features, it
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enhance
your quality of reading.

Last
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argument
is “e-readers are
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eco friendly
than
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printed
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books”
. E-readers
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keep
the environment and save the planet. Every year, 15. 8 billion trees have
been saved
by digital
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books
. E reader that
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only
has 8
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storage, save 5000
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books
space in the earth. Using e readers
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reduce
carbon footprint’s. Every
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printed
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book
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leaves
250g
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-1kg
carbon to earth
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e-books
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less than
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. All in all, e-reader
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helps
us to save our planet.

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,
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many
readers
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printed
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, they
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more comfortable and tactile it. Readers of
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books
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love
feel the
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books
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Printed
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book
readers
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the
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to socialize. They go to library for learning
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things. They
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, taking notes on the
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helps
learn new things
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. In short,
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printed
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books
may be
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nostalgic
or feels better
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e-books have more specialities and it is better for our planet.

All in all, e
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readers
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arguments
can
be listed
that more accessibility, extra features and eco-friendly.
On the other hand
,
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printed
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books
readers
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are, feels
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nostalgic
,
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helps
to socialize and taking notes on
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book
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helps
your learning.
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Printed
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books
readers
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arguments
are more emotional and dramatic,
overall
e-readers have
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advance than
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IELTS essay E-readers/e-books are better than printed books.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
612 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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