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dying several languages whether it is bad or good

dying several languages whether it is bad or good K0bM6
Language is a conventional spoken and manual sign of people in individual countries. Although normal people think languages are not important for them, linguists are worried about the vanish of most languages. As for me, I strongly stand with linguists who want to preserve local languages. First of all, language not only communicates between people but also constitutes its cultural heritage. If one country loses their language, its literature, traditions, art and history can also disappear. Secondly, loss of languages may also decrease the global languages that deprive us of looking at the world. Thirdly, when language which is not well documented or unwritten fades away, it is a loss of world’s literature. Rapid reduction of world’s language doesn’t mean better communication. However, there might be several benefits such as the problems of translation and misunderstandings from having fewer languages. That’s why people on earth mastered the same global language like English as their second language. Communities who do not speak a major world language may fall behind in science, technology and economies. Furthermore, they would not have to give up their mother languages at all because it is essential to maintain a variety of languages. For instance, travellers who visit Myanmar with its wide variety of indigenous natives and languages can learn fabulous traditions and beautiful culture of the country. In conclusion, maintaining world’s culture is the beauty of nature which means preserving small languages. If we don’t, it will result in irrecoverable cultural loss. Therefore, in contrast, these endangered minority languages must be kept as a part of the world.
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sign
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people
in individual countries. Although normal
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think
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are not
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important
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are worried
about
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the vanish
of most
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languages
. As for me, I
strongly
stand with linguists who want to preserve local languages.

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language
not
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communicates between
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also
constitutes its cultural heritage. If one country loses their
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language
, its literature, traditions, art and history can
also
disappear.
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, loss of
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languages
may
also
decrease the global
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languages
that deprive us of looking at the
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world
.
Thirdly
, when
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language
which is not well documented or unwritten fades away, it is a loss of
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world’s
literature. Rapid reduction of
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world’s
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language
doesn’t mean better communication.

However
, there might be several benefits such as the problems of translation and misunderstandings from having fewer
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languages
. That’s why
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people
on earth mastered the same global
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language
like English as their second
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language
. Communities who do not speak a major
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world
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language
may fall behind in science, technology and economies.
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.
For instance
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travellers
who visit Myanmar with its wide variety of indigenous natives and
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languages
can learn fabulous traditions and
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beautiful
culture of the country.

In conclusion
, maintaining
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world’s
culture is the beauty of nature which means preserving
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small
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languages
. If we don’t, it will result in irrecoverable cultural loss.
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, these endangered minority
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IELTS essay dying several languages whether it is bad or good

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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