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Due to advancements in electronic technology traditional entertainment such as wayang kulit and Chinese opera are rarely seen nowadays

Due to advancements in electronic technology traditional entertainment such as wayang kulit and Chinese opera are rarely seen nowadays aqljV
Nowadays, many traditional form of entertainment are dying out. This is attributed to advancements in electronic technology. Therefore, I agree with the statement that the traditional entertainment such as wayang kulit and Chinese opera are rarely played. A lot of modern entertainment is in use nowadays. User-friendly technology and the internet have all made traditional entertainment less sought after.
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traditional form of entertainment are dying out. This
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to advancements in electronic technology.
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wayang
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kulit
and Chinese opera are rarely played.
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nowadays. User-friendly technology and the internet have all made traditional entertainment less sought after.
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IELTS essay Due to advancements in electronic technology traditional entertainment such as wayang kulit and Chinese opera are rarely seen nowadays

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