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Due to advancement in technology, international tourism is at a tremendous rate. Whilst it is contended that foreign tourism promotes numerous obstacles to people rather than best understanding with people. While I agree with the situation, I also believe that it is also valuable for the country. On the one hand, there are several facts of global tourism gives much anxiety to the country the main and initial point is a language barrier to explain, tourist visit from other backgrounds so that, they are not friendly with the common language which speaks in the visiting as a result, it creates misunderstanding between communication and not able to share their feelings with others. Secondly, it is very difficult for the government to maintain the infrastructure according to oversee nations going to it is wastage of capital. Moreover, sometimes people are attacked by burglary issues and food, climate, locations that affect the person’s mood. On the other hand, it is very valuable for a p

Due to advancement in technology, international tourism is at a tremendous rate. Whilst it is contended that foreign tourism promotes numerous obstacles to people rather than best understanding with people. While I agree with the situation, I also believe that it is also valuable for the country. On the one hand, there are several facts of global tourism gives much anxiety to the country the main and initial point is a language barrier to explain, tourist visit from other backgrounds so that, they are not friendly with the common language which speaks in the visiting as a result, it creates misunderstanding between communication and not able to share their feelings with others. Secondly, it is very difficult for the government to maintain the infrastructure according to oversee nations going to it is wastage of capital. Moreover, sometimes people are attacked by burglary issues and food, climate, locations that affect the person’s mood. On the other hand, it is very valuable for a particular country. It assists to boom the academy of the nation for example, in Japan 65% of the revenue earned from the tourist's sector because visitors paid heavy taxes to the government for exploring the country. Besides, it gives identity in the front of the world with an aid of tourism because by seeking different culture, geographical location, history people are more attracted to it and learn the past of the country which helps to promote the culture in the eye of the world. In conclusion, I would reiterate that it give some negative impact on the country but a negative impact can resolve by various methods moreover its help to boost the economy and identity in the front of the public.

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