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About a language which I taught

About a language which I taught G9Q7x
From my childhood I’m passionate to study about languages mainly English. So when my parents get readied to sent me schools; I made a demand that I want to study in English medium school. Coming to my family, we belongs to a middle class and all other my sister and cousins goes Malayalam medium school. Basically except my father, none of the elders didn’t gave attention to education. So I was the first member in my family who taught in English medium upto 10th standard. When I’m joining in a private English school; believed that I will become an English lady after some years. But the journey was too difficult to me as a Malayali. Even after my under graduation in English; I’m not steady to speak in English. I can write and read. Even I can understood what others telling in English. But I’m not able to talk. That’s why on my vacation I decided to join for a spoken English class. When I shared it with my father, he asked me why I’m interested to study English before Hindi. He told me as I’m an Indian, I need to know my national language. How can I learn about another country without learning about my own country? I found his question a challenge. The inspiration for learning Hindi came into my life through my father. Writing and reading helped me to learn Hindi as well as movies and documentaries. My study was without the help of any coaching center. However, I can now easily handle my national language. I believe that nothing in this world is difficult if we love to learn. That's why I decided to become an English teacher. The mind that is not ready to concede failure even after many attempts will one day find success.
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about languages
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when my parents
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readied to
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sent
me
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schools
; I made a demand that I want to
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study
in English medium
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school
. Coming to my family, we
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belongs
to a middle
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class
and all other my sister and cousins goes Malayalam medium
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school
.
Basically
except my father, none of the elders didn’t
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attention to education.
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So
I was the
first
member in my family who taught in English medium
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upto
10th standard. When I’m joining in a private English
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school
; believed that I will become an English lady after
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some
years.
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But
the journey was too
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as a
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Malayali
. Even after my under graduation in English; I’m not steady to speak in English. I can write and read. Even I can
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what others telling in English.
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But
I’m not able to talk. That’s why on my vacation I decided to
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join
for a spoken English
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class
. When I shared it with my father, he asked me why I’m interested to
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study
English
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before
Hindi. He
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told
me as I’m an Indian, I need to know my national language. How can I learn about another country without learning about my
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own
country? I found his question a challenge. The inspiration for learning Hindi came into my life through my father. Writing and reading
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helped
me to learn Hindi
as well
as movies and documentaries. My
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study
was without the
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help
of any coaching center.
However
, I can
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now
easily
handle my national language. I believe that nothing in this world is difficult if we
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love
to learn. That's why I decided to become an English teacher. The mind
that is
not ready to concede failure even after
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many
attempts will one day find success.
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IELTS essay About a language which I taught

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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