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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Download IELTS Tutorials - Writing App List some of the causes and effects of global warming. Offer one solution that might help slow or stop the problems associated with global warming. Write at least 250 words.

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Global warming is a hot topic nowadays. In this essay, I am going to describe some causes and effects of it. As we all know that trees are absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen. They act as the lung of the Earth. However, in order to gain more space for human being, trees have been cutting down. Space are used for agriculture and living apartments. Due to the reducing number of trees, less carbon dioxide is converted into oxygen. It is one cause of global warming. Due to the growth of technology, more electricity has been required. Electronic energy nowadays are mainly generated by fossil fuel. The convertion require the burning of fossil fuel which produce a great duel of carbon dioxide. It heavier the effect of global warming. Plastic are also a huge issuer. It is a product of oild, which takes a million year to be biodegraded. It will produce land problem, consequently, some governments will try to burn them, like usual rubbish. Carbon dioxide and other toix gas will be released and increase the effect of global warming. There are some method we can do on our own to reduce the effect of global warming. Bringing your lunch box when buying takeaway can reduce the usage of plastic. Besides, turn off the machines which are not using also some usual things we can help to the Earth. Local governments can discover different reuseable energy to replace the traditional energy generator base of the environment nearby to help reduce the causes of global warming.
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causes and effects of it.

As we all know that trees are absorbing
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carbon
dioxide and releasing oxygen. They act as the lung of the Earth.
However
, in order to gain more space for human being, trees have been cutting down. Space are
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used
for agriculture and living apartments. Due to the reducing number of trees, less
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carbon
dioxide
is converted
into oxygen. It is one cause of
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global
warming.

Due to the growth of technology, more electricity has
been required
. Electronic energy nowadays are
mainly
generated by fossil fuel. The
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convertion
require the burning of fossil fuel which produce a great duel of
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carbon
dioxide.
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It
heavier the
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effect
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global
warming.

Plastic are
also
a huge issuer. It is a product of
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oild
, which takes a million year to
be biodegraded
. It will produce land problem,
consequently
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some
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governments
will try to burn them, like usual rubbish.
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Carbon
dioxide and other
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toix
gas will
be released
and increase the
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effect
of
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global
warming.

There are
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some
method we can do on our
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reduce
the
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effect
of
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global
warming. Bringing your lunch box when buying takeaway can
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reduce
the usage of plastic.
Besides
, turn off the machines which are not using
also
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some
usual things we can
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help
to the Earth. Local
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governments
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different
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reuseable
energy to replace the traditional energy generator base of the environment nearby to
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help
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reduce
the causes of
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global
warming.
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IELTS essay Download IELTS Tutorials - Writing App List some of the causes and effects of global warming. Offer one solution that might help slow or stop the problems associated with global warming.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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