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don't be shy if you are an introvert

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There is a lot of introverts in the world, but few of them can realise how wonderful they are. They often think the world is a place that just rewards extroverts, and for those who are softly introverts, it is easy to feel left out. That’s not true, so stop comparing your weakness to extroverts’ ability. What you need to do is that slowly concentrate on yourself by listening to your mind to understand who you are and let appreciate that. Last but not least, never let other thoughts make you think you are not good because everyone is shining by own way.
There is
a lot of
introverts in the world,
but
few of them can
realise
how wonderful they are. They
often
think
the world is a place that
just
rewards extroverts, and for those who are
softly
introverts, it is easy to feel
left
out.

That’s not true,
so
stop
comparing your weakness to extroverts’ ability. What you need to do is that
slowly
concentrate on yourself by listening to your mind to understand who you are and
let
appreciate that. Last
but
not least, never
let
other thoughts
make
you
think
you are not
good
because
everyone is shining by
own
way.
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IELTS essay don't be shy if you are an introvert

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
103 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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