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Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion.” Is he right?

Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right? kgOBM
I think his thinking is only half right. A fifteen-year-old boy can make decisions like an adult. He's old enough to know what should or shouldn't be to form a right opinion. But he is not mature enough to accept the consequences of his decisions. Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right? Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right?
I
think
his thinking is
only
half
right
. A fifteen-year-
old
boy can
make
decisions like an adult. He's
old
enough
to know what should or shouldn't be to form a
right
opinion.
But
he is not mature
enough
to accept the consequences of his decisions. Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s
plenty
old
enough
for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he
right
? Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s
plenty
old
enough
for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he
right
?
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IELTS essay Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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