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Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion.” Is he right?

Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right? kgOBM
I think his thinking is only half right. A fifteen-year-old boy can make decisions like an adult. He's old enough to know what should or shouldn't be to form a right opinion. But he is not mature enough to accept the consequences of his decisions. Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right? Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right?
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IELTS essay Alex says, “I’m fifteen, Dad, and that’s plenty old enough for you to at least ask my opinion. ” Is he right?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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