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Doing exercise brings many benefits for body as well as life of human.

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Doing exercise brings many benefits for body as well as life of human. A healthy life requires exercises is vital and integral in life. First, exercise combined with proper a well-balanced diet help to maitain a slim, it aslo the best way to lose weight by converting excess calories into energy. This helps you have a fit body, a good health without need for functional foods. In addition, doing exercise regularly helps to have a healthy skin. Skin is the largest organ on body and it is aslo the organ that direct contact with environment
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IELTS essay Doing exercise brings many benefits for body as well as life of human.

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94 words
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