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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. qY9p

Reading always enhance our knowledge and sharpens our mind. Juvenile gain more knowledge when reading a book. Some people believe that performing the enjoying activity is a good way to develop better skills and become more creative than reading. In my opinion both has its own prons and cons but doing funny activities are far more beneficial than reading. on the one hand the first and foremost reason why doing enjoyable activity is imperative because it sharpens the mind of the children for instance when children's plays with each other they exchange their thoughts and opinion so eventually develop more creavitive skills. on the other hand doing wile doing enjoyable activities juveniles can socialize with each others and wide their knowledge and enhance their decision making skills

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reading
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people
 believe that performing the enjoying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 way to develop better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and become more creative than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
. In my opinion both has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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 and cons This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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doing
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funny
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activities
 are far more beneficial than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
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 the one hand the first
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doing
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activity
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because
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 develop more Possible spelling mistake found.creative
creavitive
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skills
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 the other hand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 wile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
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activities
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others
 and wide their knowledge and enhance their This word is normally spelled with hyphen.decision-making
decision making
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