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Correct the information in the article.Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information.suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Correct the information in the article. Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. suggest what the magazine should do about this situation 18lA
I am writing this about your cooking courseI like a cooking. i helping my morther to prepare a food in a kitchen. now when i start a cookery course and i have achieve a most knowledge about a cooking. this cooking course is most important for me because my future dream is a i am a great chef of my country. I learn a daily Different -Different Receipe Pasta, pizza, maggi, rolls etc. This dishes are very helpful for my cooking carrier. My dream is a one day i am a great chef of india. I learn many western dishes in my cooking course. Well i advice a one more cooking course done because my country people are very foody. They like Junk food and western food. I have start a course for western dishes. Western dishes are famous all of world so i will take western dishes cooking course. i look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerly, Martin
I am writing this about your cooking
courseI
like a cooking.
i
helping my
morther
to prepare
a food
in a kitchen.
now
when
i
start
a cookery
course
and
i
have
achieve
a most knowledge about a cooking.
this
cooking
course
is most
important
for me
because
my future dream is
a
i
am a great chef of my country. I learn a daily
Different
-
Different
Receipe
Pasta, pizza,
maggi
, rolls etc.
This
dishes
are
very
helpful for my cooking carrier. My dream is a one day
i
am a great chef of
india
. I learn
many
western
dishes
in my cooking
course
. Well i advice a one more cooking
course
done
because
my country
people
are
very
foody
. They like Junk food and western food. I have
start
a
course
for western
dishes
. Western
dishes
are
famous
all of world
so
i
will take western
dishes
cooking
course
.
i
look forward to hearing from you. Yours
sincerly
,
Martin
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IELTS essay Correct the information in the article. Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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