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Does social media make you happy?

Thanks for the good post. Sorry, but I cannot agree with you. If social media didn't make us happy, nobody would be using it. It all depends on how we use them. Most of us use them to share our lives with others, and I don't see anything wrong with it that we only show good things there. However, I have to agree with you that when we see a person with a wonderful life on the internet, it can make us feel a little worse. But this is only a sign for us that we need to work on ourselves. I don’t think that today's teenagers are losing the ability to talk face-to-face. Social media will make it easier to talk to someone. Thanks to them, we can make a video call - it is much easier to call someone than meet them. I agree that the media has disadvantages, but there are few of them. The Internet makes our life much easier, and doesn’t make us unhappy.

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