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Does police helpful for controlling crimerate in a district.

Does police helpful for controlling crimerate in a district. M2Vo
Crime is a serious problem across the globe and all countries are trying to deal with this pressing issue. Things are going worst day by day in our societies and we facing such kind of crime issues regularly. We couldn't exterminate these evils from our societies but it can be controllable to some extent. Hence, Police is only department that cloud decreases these issues from our societies. For instance, We have seen number of crimes in our daily life such as robberies, street crime, killing inocents and these evils making the lives hell. In spite of the fact that police is necessary exploit in any state to controlling such kind of issues. I believe that police is trying to build our lifes peaceful and less frightful. However, Some satisfactory elements also exist in police departments in the shape of bad Cops. They are not doing their jobs honestly and the offenders make relations with those Cops for his individual benefits. In result of these acts those offenders do not get to comeuppance. In conclusion, I strongly belive that Police is extremely helpful for controlling crime rate in any state. Moreover existence of unsatisfactory elements also damaging the peace of our societies.
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Crime
is a serious problem across the globe and all countries are trying to deal with this pressing
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issue
. Things are going
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worst
day by day in our
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societies and
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we facing
such kind of
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crime
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issues
regularly
. We couldn't exterminate these evils from our
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societies
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but
it can be controllable to
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some
extent.
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,
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Police
is
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only
department that cloud decreases these
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issues
from our
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societies
.
For instance
, We have
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seen
number of
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crimes
in our daily life such as robberies, street
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crime
, killing
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inocents
and these evils making the
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lives
hell.
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In spite of
the fact that
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police
is necessary exploit in any state to controlling such kind of
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issues
. I believe that
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police
is trying to build our
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lifes
peaceful and less frightful.
However
,
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Some
satisfactory elements
also
exist in
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police
departments in the shape of
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bad
Cops. They are not doing their jobs
honestly
and the offenders
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make
relations with those Cops for his individual benefits. In result of these acts those offenders do not
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get
to comeuppance.
In conclusion
, I
strongly
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belive
that
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Police
is
extremely
helpful for controlling
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crime
rate in any state.
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Moreover
existence of unsatisfactory elements
also
damaging the peace of our
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societies
.
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IELTS essay Does police helpful for controlling crimerate in a district.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
201 words
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