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Numerous countries in the world. Higher education does not come up with much effectiveness as we expected. Instead of providing knowledge and require practical skills, college students almost focus on theoretical knowledge. Therefore lack practicality to come over the school examinations. The ordinary education system is no longer function-improving. Interactive learning forms have not been mentioned yet in college. The time spending on extracurricular activities is limited as well. Although multiple occupations require good formal qualifications, it does not mean that either behavioural skills or teamwork skills are not essential. Only theoretical knowledge without software accompanying, students will not be able to have career prospects after graduating. A knowledge-based society requires the integrity of knowledge and skills. Therefore, tertiary education needs a substantial revolution to respond to this social requires
Numerous countries in the world. Higher education does not
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come
up with much effectiveness as we
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of providing
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knowledge
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require
practical
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skills
, college students almost focus on theoretical
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knowledge
.
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Therefore
lack practicality to
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come
over the school examinations. The ordinary education system is no longer function-improving. Interactive learning forms have not
been mentioned
yet
in college. The time spending on extracurricular activities
is limited
as well
. Although multiple occupations
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require
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good
formal qualifications, it does not mean that either
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behavioural
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skills
or teamwork
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skills
are not essential.
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Only
theoretical
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knowledge
without software accompanying, students will not be able to have career prospects after graduating. A knowledge-based society
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requires
the integrity of
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knowledge
and
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skills
.
Therefore
, tertiary education needs a substantial revolution to respond to this social
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requires
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IELTS essay does college education are disappointing us?

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  American English
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129 words
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