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Do you think there are any disadvantages of relying on technology at work?

Do you think there are any disadvantages of relying on technology at work? O6R3E
Technology is a field that keeps evolving every day, modern technology is used in almost every way we can imagine, this is why is essential for us to adapt ourselves to these changes. However, as time goes by, technology has proved its detrimental effects in the way people work; from my standpoint, technology is a key work-related tool, but relying completely on it is not appropriate. The major concern about relying on technology at work is that not all workplaces have this last element, although we live in a modernized world, we can not expect to find the same kind of high-quality technology we are used to operate while working everywhere we go; this factor can also make us less self-reliant in our own abilities and capacities of successfully accomplish a required task. Thus, it is inevitable that hard work becomes underrated, since everyone has access to the same equipment and the same working conditions, it may overshadow some people’s capacity and labor performance; having advanced technology on a work environment could also make some people slothful and indolent. Despite this, we can not forget how helpful technology has become for everyone and the positive effects it brings; to illustrate, looking back in time any kind of occupation could be really demanding because everything had to be done manually without any sort of help; communication and looking for information were easily the worst tasks because they were not any means to use at our disposal, since the arrival and improvement of technology they are now approachable.
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is a field that
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keeps
evolving every day, modern
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technology
is
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used
in almost every way we can imagine, this is why is essential for us to adapt ourselves to these
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changes
.
However
, as time goes by,
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technology
has proved its detrimental effects in the way
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people
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work
; from my standpoint,
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technology
is a key work-related tool,
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but
relying completely on it is not appropriate.

The major concern about relying on
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technology
at
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work
is that not all workplaces have this last element, although we
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live
in a modernized world, we can not
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expect
to find the same kind of high-quality
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technology
we are
In the grammatical structure 'pronoun + be/get + used + to + verb', the verb 'used' is used with the gerund: "used to operating".
used to operate
while working everywhere we go; this factor can
also
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make
us less self-reliant in our
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own
abilities and capacities of
successfully
accomplish a required task.

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, it is inevitable that
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hard
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work
becomes underrated, since everyone has access to the same equipment and the same working conditions, it may overshadow
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some
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people
’s capacity and labor performance; having advanced
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technology
on a
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work
environment could
also
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make
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some
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people
slothful and indolent.

Despite this, we can not forget how helpful
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technology
has become for everyone and the
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positive
effects it brings; to illustrate, looking back in time any kind of occupation could be
really
demanding
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because
everything had to
be done
manually
without any sort of
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help
; communication and looking for information were
easily
the worst tasks
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because
they were not any means to
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use
at our disposal, since the arrival and improvement of
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technology
they are
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now
approachable.
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IELTS essay Do you think there are any disadvantages of relying on technology at work?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
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