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* Do you think that the movie and / or TV ratings Systems are effective or useful? use Specific reasons and examples to support your position

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In technological epoch, entertainment industry plays Paramount impartance role in every individuals. Feedbacks are taken audience which use for betterment of small or / and big screen. I reckon that film and or Television reviews methods are helpful. My inclinatian is justified in following paragraphs. First and formost reason behind using the ratings stysten in film idustry as well as on the television is that Film quality and what exactly audience want, it con be improved by feedback, what does it mean by that, producers and director get to know that which type of movies and content they want. Furthermore, flix and soup maker not only mitigate the problems which they have made in previous time but also TRP (television rating point) can be risen by asking to the Viewers. For instance, in 2019 The Hindu newspaper discovered that film fair award is given based on the audiences reviews and how much movie hit on the blockbuster. Moreover, by reading reviews of the audience many telecasters do changes in their work and in that way Watchers can be watched what really they want. Myriad of producers messer their mistakes which they have done while making movies or any other Serial. In addition, it can be concluded that which movies or programmes are more popular between the people. Although, sometimes feedback create wrong impression on the maker, it much vital for those, who truly believe in progress. For recample, several producers go in to the audience and take one-to-one interview and asks real opinion about their hard work. To recapitulate, ratings methods extremely untilizable in the making movies or any Other soup opere. Additionally, viewer also feel happiness when they find content of the movies or any other television's is interesting
In technological epoch, entertainment industry plays Paramount
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impartance
role in every
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individuals
. Feedbacks
are taken
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audience
which
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use
for betterment of
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small
or / and
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big
screen. I reckon that film and or Television reviews methods are helpful. My
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inclinatian
is justified
in following paragraphs.

First
and
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formost
reason behind using the ratings
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stysten
in film
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idustry
as well
as on the television is that Film quality and what exactly
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audience
want, it
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con
be
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improved
by feedback, what does it mean by that, producers and director
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get
to know that which type of
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movies
and content they want.
Furthermore
,
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flix
and soup maker not
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only
mitigate the problems which they have made in previous time
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but
also
TRP (television rating point) can
be risen
by
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asking to
the Viewers.
For instance
, in 2019 The Hindu newspaper discovered that film
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
award is
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given
based on the
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audiences
reviews and how much
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movie
hit on the blockbuster.

Moreover
, by reading reviews of the
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audience
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
telecasters do
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changes
in their work and in that way Watchers can be
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watched
what
really
they want. Myriad of producers
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messer
their mistakes which they have done while making
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movies
or any other Serial.
In addition
, it can
be concluded
that which
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movies
or
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programmes
are more popular between the
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people
. Although,
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sometimes
feedback create
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wrong
impression on the maker,
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it
much vital for those, who
truly
believe in progress. For
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recample
, several producers go in to the
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audience
and take one-to-one interview and asks real opinion about their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work.

To recapitulate, ratings methods
extremely
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untilizable
in the making
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movies
or any Other soup
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opere
.
Additionally
, viewer
also
feel happiness when they find content of the
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movies
or any other television's is interesting
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IELTS essay * Do you think that the movie and / or TV ratings Systems are effective or useful? use Specific reasons and examples to support your position

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