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technology is advantage or disadvantage

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it is doubted that computer is not brought many benefits about physical and it also makes a lot of things of the spirit. Almost people in the world are getting used to social media such like: facebook, zalo, instagram. Interaction is one of the populated example: people of today always enjoy interacting without ever meeting, studying in each lesson instead of learning tradition able to writing and reading, computer and software add picture, video, and innovation help lector each other student could amazing. Indeed, computer is powerful toll due to it can geographic location within five second even you go to
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also
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things of the spirit. Almost
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people
in the world are getting
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facebook
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zalo
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instagram
. Interaction is one of the populated example:
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people
of
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today
always enjoy interacting without ever meeting, studying in each lesson
instead
of learning tradition able to writing and reading, computer and software
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add
picture, video, and innovation
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help
lector each other student could
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amazing
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can geographic
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IELTS essay technology is advantage or disadvantage

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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