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Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Byla
The pros and cons of usage of technology have always sparked heated controversy. While some people believe that disadvantages have outweighed advantages though others have tended to oppose them. However, As per my point of view, I believe that the penetration of technology in our daily life Not only can improves(improve) mankind lifestyle (mankind's)but it also helps humanity to grow faster in all industry(industries) than any other time in history. To begin with, Thanks to technology advances and tech companies like “Apple”, We have witnessed how hardware and software have been implemented into wearable gadgets helping to monitor health factors in our body real time. For example, Smart watched like “Apple Watch” can monitor health rate or blood pressure or any other factors and give an alert in critical situations and even they can call emergency or send a daily report to doctors. Furthermore, the combination of these technologies has reduced a massive rate of diseases by collecting data for pharmaceutical companies to produce better products. Moreover, Improving way of communication is an another(is another) reason that makes me advocate of technology. Nowadays, We have been faced a new model of societies(society) which has boosted the speed of communication among people. For instance, Messaging apps Like “Telegram” or “Whatsapp” has enabled peer to peer connections to send and receive any messages in less than a second across the world. Given that, Parents are able to have a video calls (have video calls) with their off springs living in another country. And also companies used these technologies to arrange their staff and improve their work performances. To recapitulate, Even when we can not ignore technology advances disadvantages like when people spend a lot time in Social media like “Instagram” or “Facebook” rather than reading a book, But technology has brought a lot of advantages and improved many aspects of our like that is almost impossible to say we have been harmed by technology advances.
The pros and cons of usage of
technology
have always sparked heated controversy. While
some
people
believe that disadvantages have outweighed advantages though others have tended to oppose them.
However
, As per my point of view, I believe that the penetration of
technology
in our daily life Not
only
can
improves
(
improve
) mankind lifestyle (mankind's)
but
it
also
helps
humanity to grow faster in all industry(industries) than any other time in history.

To
begin
with, Thanks to
technology
advances and tech
companies
like “Apple”, We have witnessed how hardware and software have
been implemented
into wearable gadgets helping to monitor health factors in our body real time.
For example
, Smart
watched
like “Apple
Watch
” can monitor health rate or blood pressure or any other factors and give an alert in critical situations and even they can call emergency or
send
a daily report to doctors.
Furthermore
, the combination of these
technologies
has
reduced
a massive rate of diseases by collecting data for pharmaceutical
companies
to produce better products.

Moreover
, Improving way of communication is
an another(
is another) reason that
makes
me advocate of
technology
. Nowadays, We have
been faced
a new model of societies(society) which has boosted the speed of communication among
people
.
For instance
, Messaging apps Like “Telegram” or “
Whatsapp
” has enabled peer to peer connections to
send
and receive any messages in less than a second across the world.
Given
that, Parents are able to have a video calls (have video calls) with their off springs living in another country. And
also
companies
used
these
technologies
to arrange their staff and
improve
their work performances.

To recapitulate, Even when we can not
ignore
technology
advances disadvantages like when
people
spend
a lot time
in Social media like “Instagram” or “Facebook”
rather
than reading a book,
But
technology
has brought
a lot of
advantages and
improved
many
aspects of our like
that is
almost impossible to say we have
been harmed
by
technology
advances.
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IELTS essay Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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  American English
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323 words
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