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Do you think people are naturally polite or they learn to be polite

Do you think people are naturally polite or they learn to be polite PR9dj
Whether people are naturally polite or they learn to be polite remains controversial. Some people think human beings are naturally polite but some situation make them cruel. However, orthers believe people are rude by nature; nevertheless, I consider both of them are correct. Why I contend that. In the light of the fact that nothing is absolute, a lot of people polite naturally and orthers learn to be polite. I met many kids who are very polite. When they meet the olders, they greet politely, they know appreciate the hand without education of their parents. On the other hand, there are also many kids are disrespectful to other people, they ignore all the people that senior to them and they don’t know how to say “Thanks”. Therefore, they need to be taught to be polite to everybody. In conclusion, people are naturally polite or leant to be polite is not crucial, it’s significant to keep that politeness.
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them and
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IELTS essay Do you think people are naturally polite or they learn to be polite

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  American English
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157 words
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