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In some countries, the number of animal and plant species is declining. What are the causes? What can be done?

In some countries, the number of animal and plant species is declining. What are the causes? What can be done? 6aOol
Global warming is increasing year by year and it can give bad influence and also the number of animals and plants are decreasing in some countries. There are several reasons why animals and green plants are disappearing. Undoubtedly, clear weather is the most essential part of plants and animals life. Some countries are struggling with bad air pollution, because every single plant and animal needs good air and comfortable area to grow. Moreover, another specific resource is clear water. If the countryt can not provide comfortable environment to plants and animals to live there. Some plants and animals may disappear and aslo it may cause other harmful effects such as increase dry lands and carbon dioxide because animals always provide the land with their fertilizer as well as plants can help the clear oxygen to the air. In other words, it all depends on the country efforts to preserve these both animals and plants. On the other hand, some countries able prevent to disappearing plants and animals. Many countries need to increase planting and attend to the drying lands as well as agriculture. Furthermore, there are some animals are involved in the red book around the world. However, some countries may give access to hunters to hunt or kill the valuable animals and also animals may disappear fully in our life as well as plants, because animals and plants are connected strongly in each other such as if animal can not give the fertilize to environment aslo the plants could not grow. Some countries can make some zoo and biological are to protect them and these countries are trying to take care all of the natural species and animals In conclusion, animals and plants have essential role on the nature, because animals can give natural fertilize to plants and natural species may use it and bring clear oxygen to the environment
Global warming is increasing year by year and it can
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influence and
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the number of
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animals
and
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plants
are decreasing in
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some
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countries
. There are several reasons why
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animals
and green
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plants
are disappearing.

Undoubtedly
,
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clear
weather is the most essential part of
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plants
and
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animals
life.
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Some
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countries
are struggling with
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bad
air pollution,
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because
every single
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plant
and
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animal
needs
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good
air and comfortable area to grow.
Moreover
, another specific resource is
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clear
water. If the
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countryt
can not provide comfortable environment to
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plants
and
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animals
to
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live
there.
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and
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may disappear and
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aslo
it may cause
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other
harmful effects such as increase dry lands and carbon dioxide
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because
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animals
always provide the land with their fertilizer
as well
as
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plants
can
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help
the
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clear
oxygen to the air. In
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words, it all depends on the
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country
efforts to preserve these both
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animals
and plants.

On the
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hand,
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some
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countries
able
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prevent
to disappearing
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plants
and
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animals
.
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countries
need to increase planting and attend to the drying lands
as well
as agriculture.
Furthermore
, there are
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some
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animals
are involved
in the red book around the world.
However
,
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some
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countries
may
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give
access to hunters to hunt or kill the valuable
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animals
and
also
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animals
may disappear
fully
in our life
as well
as
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plants
,
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animals
and
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plants
are connected
strongly
in each
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such as if
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animal
can not
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give
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the fertilize
to environment
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aslo
the
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could not grow.
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can
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make
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some
zoo and biological are to protect them and these
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countries
are trying to take care
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all of the
natural species and
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animals


In conclusion
,
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animals
and
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plants
have essential role on the nature,
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because
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animals
can
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give
natural fertilize to
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plants
and natural species may
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use
it and bring
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clear
oxygen to the environment
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IELTS essay In some countries, the number of animal and plant species is declining. What are the causes? What can be done?

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