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archaeologists discover proof that chocolate has been present for roughly 1500 years

archaeologists discover proof that chocolate has been present for roughly 1500 years BwRGX

In this paragraph, archaeologists discover proof that chocolate has been present for roughly 1500 years. However, it is stated at the conclusion of the passage that they later discovered further evidence of an older cocoa-making civilisation. It's worth noting that not everyone accepts it, so this is a problem they'll have to research more. (Line 8, 9: "They argue that this is proof of another civilization preparing cacao beverages much earlier. Because not everyone believes their evidence, it appears that additional research is required ").

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