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Do you think online shopping causes conflicts between customers and companies?

Do you think online shopping causes conflicts between customers and companies? LrbLG
A highly controversial issue appears to relate to whether online shopping leads to argument between customers and companies. Although to some extent I agree that online shopping is problematic, I also think that there are pros of purchasing from websites, too. One the one hand, there are certain problems that consumers can’t evade in the online shopping. First and foremost, the most common problem faced by regular customers is product quality. To be more specific, the quality of the product is often not the same what is presented in the pictures on the websites. Secondly, the reason why customers often hesitate to purchase online is time. In other words, the delivery time is not known in most of the websites. As opposed to most people’s thoughts that online shopping saves consumer’s time, it can actually wastes your whole day. To illustrate, because of the unknown date of the delivery, you can’t plan your day. Another common trouble is limited payment preferences. A lot of times, consumers do not know how to make the payment if the debit cards they use are not available as an option. More so, purchasers are often stuck with the payment options when cash on delivery is not available. With online frauds picking up steam, most customers prefer paying cash on delivery as they skeptical about their card details. One the other hand, online shopping also has some pros. Firstly, if your delivery time is obvious, instead of going to the stores, you can do shopping from home, saving your time and money. Another trouble in a shopping centre is that sometimes customers can encounter salespeople which try to influence you at making a decision or even not only influence but also try to make decisions on themselves. Whereas in online shopping it is impossible to witness at such an unpleasant situation. Additionally, distance is another advantage of online shopping. To demonstrate, if the product which customer wants is not accessible in his or her city or country, he can get it from online websites. Overall, both sides, once discussed from various perspectives, seem to hold logical reasons, from my point of view, each kind of shopping has advantages, specifically. Depending on the situation, consumers should make their own decisions.
A
highly
controversial issue appears to relate to whether
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online
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shopping
leads to argument between
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customers
and
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companies
. Although to
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some
extent I
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agree
that
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online
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is problematic, I
also
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think
that there are pros of purchasing from websites, too.

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One
the one hand, there are certain problems that
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consumers
can’t evade in the
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online
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shopping
.
First
and foremost, the most common problem faced by regular
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customers
is product quality. To be more specific, the quality of the product is
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often
not the same what
is presented
in the pictures on the websites.
Secondly
, the reason why
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customers
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often
hesitate to
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purchase
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online
is
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time
.
In other words
, the
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delivery
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time
is not known in most of the websites. As opposed to most
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people
’s thoughts that
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online
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shopping
saves
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consumer’s
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time
, it can actually
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wastes
your whole day. To illustrate,
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because
of the unknown date of the
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delivery
, you can’t plan your day. Another common trouble
is limited
payment preferences.
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A lot of
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times
,
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consumers
do not know how to
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make
the payment if the debit cards they
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use
are not available as an option. More
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so
, purchasers are
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often
stuck with the payment options when cash on
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delivery
is not available. With
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online
frauds picking up steam, most
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customers
prefer paying cash on
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delivery
as they skeptical about their card
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details
.

Did you mean "on"?
One
the other hand,
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online
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shopping
also
has
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some
pros.
Firstly
, if your
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delivery
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time
is obvious,
instead
of going to the stores, you can do
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shopping
from home, saving your
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time
and money. Another trouble in a
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shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
is that
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sometimes
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customers
can encounter salespeople which try to influence you at making a decision or even not
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only
influence
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but
also
try to
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make
decisions on themselves.
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Whereas
in
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online
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shopping
it is impossible to witness at such an unpleasant situation.
Additionally
, distance is another advantage of
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online
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shopping
. To demonstrate, if the product which
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customer
wants is not accessible in
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his or her
city or country, he can
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get
it from
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online
websites.

Overall
, both sides, once discussed from various perspectives, seem to hold logical reasons, from my point of view, each kind of
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shopping
has advantages,
specifically
. Depending on the situation,
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consumers
should
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make
their
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own
decisions.
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IELTS essay Do you think online shopping causes conflicts between customers and companies?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
374 words
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