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• Do you think most programmes on television are good? [Why/Why not?]

• Do you think most programmes on television are good? [Why/Why not? ] Nr8kg
Television is one the greatest inventions men have ever made. The significance of television is predominant in the world of sophistication. It acts as a catalyst in further research performance and opens up the avenues for a better comprehension of the television programmers. The programs on television are good or bad is widely debated with many people claiming that shows on TV are good on the contrary others obdurate it. From my perspective this notion merits a serious consideration and I will express my views in this essay.
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the greatest inventions
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men
have ever made. The significance of
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television
is predominant in the world of sophistication. It acts as a catalyst in
further
research performance and opens up the avenues for a better comprehension of the
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television
programmers. The programs on
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television
are
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good
or
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bad
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many
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people
claiming that
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shows
on TV are
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on the contrary
others obdurate it. From my perspective this notion merits a serious consideration and I will express my views in this essay.
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IELTS essay • Do you think most programmes on television are good? [Why/Why not? ]

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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