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Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion. 9Lag0
In many parts of the world, committing violent crimes is being more familiar. Some people argue that people who admit violent crimes should have the capital punishment of death, while others say that the death penalty is unacceptable. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of activating the death penalty and shows how the positive effects outweigh the deactivation of this punishment. On one hand, the death penalty had a lot of advantages to the whole society. It forces criminals to stop violating others and as a consequence, it will save innocents lives. Also, it will share the general feel of safe which will level up the security and let the society as a place where people want to live or visit. In contrast with the advantages, some crimes are not violent as much as the capital punishment. For example, if someone had killed another one by mistake, he should not be punished with the death penalty, because he did not choose to kill, a lot of alternatives are there to be studied. In 2020, Jordan was a vivid epitome of the advantages of capital punishment. A huge violent crime take place, and all of the community had the feel of being unsecured until the judge decided to prison the criminals and give the death penalty to some of them. Then, people's life got to the past feel of security. In conclusion, each crime should have a way of punishment that prevents anyone to commit it. Also, I believe that most of the people love to live a sweet life and no one will throw themselves to die. From this statement, I think that punishment levels should be distributed in regard to its violent level and the capital punishment of death should be at the top of the pyramid.
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should have the
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of death, while others say that the death
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is unacceptable. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of activating the death
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penalty
and
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effects outweigh the deactivation of this punishment.

On one hand, the death
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penalty
had
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a lot of
advantages to the whole society. It forces criminals to
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stop
violating others and as a consequence, it will save innocents
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lives
.
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the society as a place where
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are not
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violent
as much as the
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capital
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punishment
.
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, if someone had killed another one by mistake, he should not
be punished
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penalty
,
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because
he did not choose to kill,
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a lot of
alternatives are there to
be studied
.

In 2020, Jordan was a vivid epitome of the advantages of
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capital
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punishment
. A huge
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violent
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crime
take place, and
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all of the
community had the feel of
being unsecured
until the judge decided to prison the criminals and give the death
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penalty
to
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some
of them. Then,
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people
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got
to the past feel of security.

In conclusion
, each
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crime
should have a way of
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punishment
that
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prevents
anyone to commit it.
Also
, I believe that most of the
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people
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love
to
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live
a sweet life and no one will throw themselves to
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die
. From this statement, I
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think
that
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punishment
levels should
be distributed
in regard to its
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violent
level and the
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capital
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punishment
of death should be at the top of the pyramid.
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IELTS essay Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.

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5 paragraphs
300 words
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