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Do you prefer to use Cash or Credit card

Do you prefer to use Cash or Credit card d3gN2
Cash and the credit cards are the medium through which we can use the money we have. Cash is the well known way to use where money transactions are done hand to hand. Credit cards are the advanced way to use money where we can directly transact money to the persons account than giving it to hand. It is more easy to carry. I think that credit cards are more easier way of transactions than the hand to hand cash. It is much more safer as it is difficult to carry cash around.
Cash
and the credit cards are the medium through which we can
use
the
money
we have.
Cash
is the well known way to
use
where
money
transactions
are done
hand
to
hand
. Credit cards are the advanced way to
use
money
where we can
directly
transact
money
to the persons account than giving it to
hand
. It is more easy to carry. I
think
that credit cards are
more easier
way of transactions than the
hand
to
hand
cash
. It is much
more safer
as it is difficult to carry
cash
around.
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IELTS essay Do you prefer to use Cash or Credit card

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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