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Do you prefer to use Cash or Credit card

Do you prefer to use Cash or Credit card d3gN2
Cash and the credit cards are the medium through which we can use the money we have. Cash is the well known way to use where money transactions are done hand to hand. Credit cards are the advanced way to use money where we can directly transact money to the persons account than giving it to hand. It is more easy to carry. I think that credit cards are more easier way of transactions than the hand to hand cash. It is much more safer as it is difficult to carry cash around.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Cash
and the credit cards are the medium through which we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the
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money
we have.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Cash
is the well known way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
where
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money
transactions
are done
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hand
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hand
. Credit cards are the advanced way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
where we can
directly
transact
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
to the persons account than giving it to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hand
. It is more easy to carry. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that credit cards are
Use only "easier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more easier
way of transactions than the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hand
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cash
. It is much
Use only "safer" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more safer
as it is difficult to carry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cash
around.

IELTS essay Do you prefer to use Cash or Credit card

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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