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Do you often use a computer ?

Do you often use a computer ? PXPL2
Do you often use a computer? Of course, we live in a technological era, and in the current Covid-19 pandemic, when we can’t interact directly with each other, a computer becomes an object attached to everyone. As I am currently a student, computers are always a useful tool that I use on a daily basis to study and work. If you have a computer, you can find all the information you need, communicate with other devices, and do a lot more. How do you usually get online? Well, I guess I stay connected to the internet all day because I don't want to miss any important announcements from my school or my friends. Except for some special cases, such as when I don't want to be bothered with my sleep or when my house's Wi-Fi is down. As I previously stated, we now live in a technological era, and if you do not update our information regularly, you will quickly fall behind. Do you prefer desktops or laptops? In my own views, I prefer laptops to desktops because of one reason. You know, Although desktops offer excellent performance at a low cost as well as long durability, their mobility are lacking, which makes them unsuitable for those who must move frequently. Laptops, on the other hand, will easily overcome this flaw so laptops give me a chance to work and entertain in variety of places. What do you use your computer for? Honestly, Because I am a student, the computer is mainly used for my educational purposes. In addition, like many other young people, I often use laptops to watch movies, play games, communicate with relatives and friends, and so on. I believe computers to be one of the most important items to making my life more convenient. Do you think it is important to learn how to use a computer? In my opinion, knowing how to use a computer is a necessary skill for everyone in today's technology era, when everything is depended on computers. It can be seen that when learning online, we do need to know how to use a computer in order to participate in online classes or take the online test. On top of that, Computers will also help our daily lives and work more efficient and simple. We can communicate with friends in anywhere just by a laptop and wifi connection, for instance.
Do you
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often
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use
a computer?

Of course
, we
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live
in a technological era, and in the
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current
Covid-19 pandemic, when we can’t interact
directly
with each
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other
, a computer becomes an object attached to everyone. As I am
currently
a student, computers are always a useful tool that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
on a daily basis to study and work. If you have a computer, you can find all the information you need, communicate with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
devices, and do a lot more.

How do you
usually
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get
online?

Well, I guess I stay connected to the internet all day
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because
I don't want to miss any
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important
announcements from my school or my friends.
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Except for
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some
special cases, such as when I don't want to
be bothered
with my sleep or when my
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house
's Wi-Fi is down. As I previously stated, we
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now
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live
in a technological era, and if you do not update our information
regularly
, you will
quickly
fall behind.

Do you prefer desktops or laptops?

In my
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own
views, I prefer
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laptops
to desktops
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because
of one reason. You know, Although desktops offer excellent performance at a low cost
as well
as long durability, their mobility are lacking, which
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makes
them unsuitable for those who
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must
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move
frequently
.
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Laptops
, on the
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other
hand, will
easily
overcome this flaw
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so
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laptops
give me a chance to work and entertain in variety of places.

What do you
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use
your computer for?

Honestly
,
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Because
I am a student, the computer is
mainly
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used
for my educational purposes.
In addition
, like
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many
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other
young
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people
, I
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often
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use
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laptops
to
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watch
movies, play games, communicate with relatives and friends, and
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so
on. I believe computers to be one of the most
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important
items to making my life more convenient.

Do you
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think
it is
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important
to learn how to
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use
a computer?

In my opinion, knowing how to
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use
a computer is a necessary
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skill
for everyone in
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today
's technology era, when everything
is depended
on computers. It can be
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seen
that when learning online, we do need to know how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a computer in order to participate in online classes or take the online
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test
.
On top of that
, Computers will
also
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help
our daily
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lives
and work more efficient and simple. We can communicate with friends in anywhere
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just
by a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
and
Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)
wifi
connection,
for instance
.
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IELTS essay Do you often use a computer ?

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
399 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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