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A person that you met once and want to know about her

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In daily life we ​​meet a lot of people, but the people who make us meet once and want to meet again can only be counted on the fingers. During a trip to Da Nang, I went with my mother to have breakfast. Unfortunately that morning we forgot to bring money and the owner of the restaurant offered it for free and did not take our money, although before that we never knew each other. She really makes me grateful, the food she cooks is delicious and her kindness makes the food even more special. She's about the same age as my mother with tanned skin with a hint of Da Nang's sea, her face exudes kindness and is extremely friendly. After eating, I always thank her and look forward to coming back to Da Nang in the nearest time to support her again and express my gratitude for her help.
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IELTS essay A person that you met once and want to know about her

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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