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Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computer not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Cars and other vehicles like trucks without man at the wheel is going to be a reality, as scientifically predicted. The question is whether cars driven by computers is positive or negative, and we will probably find out in next few years. Although it will be for a while to get in an auto-driving car, I agree that it is predictable. Many prototypes have being developed for years, and even some are unveiled like Telsa. They, also, are now being tested, especially with a variety of hardware platforms and updated softwares to learn from driving data and automatically control the car. These vehicles, soon enough, will be finally released and barrel onto highways. I believe that drivers will be more understandably comfortable if they can take their hands off the wheel all the times especially during a long journey. I think this will be not beyond autopilot’s capability once it is activated. However, they should not totally trust the autopilot features at least now. Many crashes involving Telsa automotive prototypes can be taken as an example when they haven’t learnt how to avoid these crashes before. Many say this is a test and we are working on, but this is a matter of life and death. And, my most horrible fear of autopilot is hacking when it seems to be not only a cinematic death scene. We would have a long way to go for the comforts of a car driving itself, but this is the future of transport. Although our life will be easier with an automotive car, its negative effects should be more considered.
Cars
and other vehicles like trucks without
man
at the wheel is going to be a reality, as
scientifically
predicted. The question is whether
cars
driven by computers is
positive
or
negative
, and we will
probably
find out in
next
few years.

Although it will be for a while to
get
in an auto-driving
car
, I
agree
that it is predictable.
Many
prototypes have
being developed
for years, and even
some
are unveiled
like
Telsa
. They,
also
, are
now
being
tested
,
especially
with a variety of hardware platforms and updated
softwares
to learn from driving data and
automatically
control the
car
. These vehicles,
soon
enough
, will be
finally
released and barrel onto highways.

I believe that drivers will be more
understandably
comfortable if they can take their hands off the wheel all the times
especially
during a long journey. I
think
this will be not beyond autopilot’s capability once it
is activated
.
However
, they should not
totally
trust the autopilot features at least
now
.
Many
crashes involving
Telsa
automotive prototypes can
be taken
as an example when they haven’t
learnt
how to avoid these crashes
before
.
Many
say this is a
test and
we are working on,
but
this is a matter of life and death. And, my most horrible fear of autopilot is hacking when it seems to be not
only
a cinematic death scene.

We would have a long way to go for the comforts of a
car
driving itself,
but
this is the future of transport. Although our life will be easier with an automotive
car
, its
negative
effects should be more considered.
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IELTS essay Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computer not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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