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Do you like fast food?? Why or why not?

Do you like fast food? ? Why or why not? yxApd
Yes, fast food appeals to me so much and it is something that everyone enjoys. People who don't have a lot of time so fast food is my cup of tea because it saves our time when we are working in an office. That is so convenient. It is everywhere that is inexpensive, incredibly tasty and a variety of options. However, our health does not benefit from fast food. Nonetheless, it may be eaten by anybody from children and adults, making it quite popular. All in all, on a weekly basic. I normally consume fast food.
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is my cup of tea
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it saves our time when we are working in an office.
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convenient. It is everywhere
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tasty and a variety of options.
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, our health does not benefit from
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fast
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food
. Nonetheless, it may
be eaten
by anybody from children and adults, making it quite popular. All in all, on a weekly basic. I
normally
consume
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IELTS essay Do you like fast food? ? Why or why not?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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