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Do you have many close friends ?

Do you have many close friends ? 0J3B
- I have only one friend I would confide in. I’m quite picky and more importantly, I have a somewhat irrational fear that none of my friends really like me and that I’m just a guy they can barely tolerate and it is hard for me to live in harmony with them. - There is no doubt that friendships play a vital/important/crucial/significant role in our life. They make our lives interesting and wonderful. They help us develop a sense of sharing whether they are tangible things or just inspirational or motivational words - It depends. Normally, I’m more of a loner and generally spend more time in solitude than with friends. But when I’m in a bad mood, loneliness makes me feel isolated from the whole world. These days, I will hang out with my friends so that sad and unhappy thoughts cannot come - I find myself attracted to people who are honest and who know how to behave with others. I always avoid making friends with people who have a superiority complex into my mind. - Actually I like to talk with cyber friends more than having real-world conversations. I think others observe me a lot, they judge me and hence I become very self conscious and shy away from speaking face to face.
-
I have
only
one
friend
I would confide in. I’m quite picky and more
importantly
, I have a somewhat irrational fear that none of my
friends
really
like me and that I’m
just
a guy they can
barely
tolerate and it is
hard
for me to
live
in harmony with them.
-
There is no doubt that friendships play a vital/
important
/crucial/significant role in our life. They
make
our
lives
interesting and wonderful. They
help
us develop a sense of sharing whether they are tangible things or
just
inspirational or motivational words

-
It depends.
Normally
, I’m more of a loner and
generally
spend more time in solitude than with
friends
.
But
when I’m in a
bad
mood, loneliness
makes
me feel isolated from the whole world. These days, I will hang out with my
friends
so
that sad and unhappy thoughts cannot
come
-
I find myself attracted to
people
who are honest and who know how to behave with others. I always avoid making
friends
with
people
who have a superiority complex into my mind.

-
Actually I like to talk with cyber
friends
more than having real-world conversations. I
think
others observe me a lot, they judge me and
hence
I become
very
self conscious
and shy away from speaking face to face.
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IELTS essay Do you have many close friends ?

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2 paragraphs
216 words
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