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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has noting to do with their success. v.1

When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has noting to do with their success. v. 1
By taking the help of translation services, nowadays masses can break the barriers of communication between the different types of languages. In recent times, most of the folks like to use online application for conversion purposes, so it that situation, it has many advantages, but somehow it has some disadvantages too, however, I believe that its benefits outweigh its shortcomings. This essay elaborated my opinion and ideas in trail paragraph. Transaction services are beneficial to the people of different cultures as it helps them to read literature which has been written in different languages. Apart from that, transaction services are currently helping millions of students who are aspiring to become experts in their respective field. By enabling to read journals and books published in various languages. To exemplify, we can now read many books about science, though internet which are originally written in other languages. Moreover, it comes in to aid of the tourist who can understand the meaning of the different languages by just scanning it or typing into the device and by doing this they can easily communicate with the native people. To cite an example, most of the foreigners travelling in India use online translator to communicate with Indians. In sharp contrast, translation software sometimes is not accurate which create problems, comprehend the language and meaning of word sometime are not displayed correctly. Besides this, to do some translation, one requires a stable Internet connection and a smart device like a computer or the Internet which might not be possible everywhere. For example, many of the villages of India are not connected with Internet services so at that moment, communicating with others might not be possible for a foreigner without the Internet. In conclusion, conversion of the languages with the use of the Internet is a good service. Though is has some drawbacks, I think the benefits of such services are second to none.
By taking the
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help
of translation
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services
, nowadays masses can break the barriers of communication between the
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different
types of
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languages
. In recent times, most of the folks like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
online application for conversion purposes,
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so
it that situation, it has
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many
advantages,
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but
somehow it has
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some
disadvantages too,
however
, I believe that its benefits outweigh its shortcomings. This essay elaborated my opinion and
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ideas
in trail paragraph.

Transaction
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services
are beneficial to the
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people
of
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different
cultures as it
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helps
them to read literature which has
been written
in
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different
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languages
. Apart from that, transaction
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services
are
currently
helping millions of students who are aspiring to become experts in their respective field. By enabling to read journals and books published in various
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. To exemplify, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
read
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many
books about science, though internet which are
originally
written in other languages.

Moreover
, it
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comes
in to aid of the tourist who can understand the meaning of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
scanning it or typing into the device and by doing this they can
easily
communicate with the native
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. To cite an example, most of the foreigners travelling in India
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
online translator to communicate with Indians.

In sharp contrast, translation software
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sometimes
is not accurate which create problems, comprehend the
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language
and meaning of word sometime are not displayed
correctly
.
Besides
this, to do
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some
translation, one requires a stable Internet connection and a smart device like a computer or the Internet which might not be possible everywhere.
For example
,
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many
of the villages of India are not connected with Internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
at that moment, communicating with others might not be possible for a foreigner without the Internet.

In conclusion
, conversion of the
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languages
with the
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use
of the Internet is a
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good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. Though is has
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some
drawbacks, I
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think
the benefits of such
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services
are second to none.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has noting to do with their success. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
317 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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