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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Youth is wasted on the young". Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.2

: "Youth is wasted on the young". Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 2
Some of the old people may think they should have worked more or studied more when they were young and they believe that they have wasted their youth by doing entertainments and other things with their friends. Some others believe that they should have done more hobbies and made pleasure time for themselves when they were young. Anyway, both groups think they have wasted their youth. But I do not think by this way. Youth has special characteristics; young people are full of energy. Doing some exciting things is possible just in youth so people in youth can make amazing memories that can make them prude to their life. Anyone can work or study full time; all of us need hobbies and relaxation times, so old people should not think that they have wasted their time in their youth by exciting entertainments. However, people in youth should prepare themselves for the future because the future will arrive quickly, so the second group of people that think they have wasted their youth by working hard should know that if they had not worked hard in the youth, they would not have achieved what they have now. Also, they can do some hobbies and entertainment and make the good times with their friends; all of the old people can feel youth by exercising, eating healthy foods, and doing some exciting things. In my opinion, one of the important characteristics of the mankind is that he is not satisfied with anything that he has. When they are a child, they aspire to grow up, and when they grow up they miss their childhood, and consequently, when they get old, they wish to wish to return to the youth. For example, when I was a child, I always imagine my adulthood and wish to grow up very fast, but now that I am young, I miss my childhood and like to experience just one day of my childhood. Therefore, all of us should try to use the " Now" ; the life is the collection of all of the moments that we are experiencing them. People in youth can do some special thing that they cannot do them in other ages; equally old people have enough knowledge and money that young people do not have, so any level of life has special advantages and our duty is using them in appropriate time. For a conclusion, old people should not think that they have wasted their youth, they can make their old ages very useful and can enjoy it by doing some special things like traveling.
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young and
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entertainments and other things with their friends.
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time
for themselves when they were
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. Anyway, both groups
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think
they have wasted their
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youth
.
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I do not
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think
by this way.

Youth has
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special
characteristics;
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young
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people
are full of energy.
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some
exciting things is possible
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in
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youth
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people
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can
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amazing memories that can
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make
them prude to their life. Anyone can work or study full
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time
; all of us need hobbies and relaxation
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times
,
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so
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that they have wasted their
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time
in their
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youth
by exciting entertainments.
However
,
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people
in
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youth
should prepare themselves for the future
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because
the future will arrive
quickly
,
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the second group of
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that
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think
they have wasted their
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youth
by working
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should know that if they had not worked
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hard
in the
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youth
, they would not have achieved what they have
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now
.
Also
, they can do
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some
hobbies and entertainment and
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make
the
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good
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times
with their friends;
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all of the
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old
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people
can feel
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youth
by exercising, eating healthy foods, and
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doing
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some
exciting things.

In my opinion, one of the
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important
characteristics of the mankind is that he is not satisfied with anything that he has. When they are a child, they aspire to grow up, and when they grow up they miss their childhood, and
consequently
, when they
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get
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old
, they
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wish to wish to
return to the
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youth
.
For example
, when I was a child, I always imagine my adulthood and wish to grow up
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very
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,
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now
that I am
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, I miss my childhood and like to experience
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one day of my childhood.
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, all of us should try to
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use
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all of the
moments that we are experiencing them.
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can do
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thing that they cannot do them in other ages;
equally
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old
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people
have
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enough
knowledge and money that
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young
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people
do not have,
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so
any level of life has
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special
advantages and our duty is using them in appropriate time.

For a conclusion,
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old
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people
should not
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think
that they have wasted their
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youth
, they can
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make
their
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old
ages
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very
useful and can enjoy it by
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doing
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some
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special
things like traveling.
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IELTS essay : "Youth is wasted on the young". Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
431 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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