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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v.867

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v. 867
From down side of humanity, being honest with people in our relationship has been a key factor in our social life which is much talked about not only by sociologists but also other open- minder citizens. It has been hard to reach a consensus about whether people tell truth or lie in their life and every situation. In addition, telling the lie is so abnormal and ruins the relationship so you cannot fix it again. From my own perspective, the statement is true, I agree with idea and I explicate my primary reasons through the following paragraphs. To commence, the first equisetic point that deserved to be mentioned is that about creating truthful and reliable relationship between people. Generally speaking, most people tend to have relationship with someone who does not tell lie and is so reliable person. In addition, the core of all firm relationship is based on trustworthy. The noteworthy relevant refreshing intelligently statistics in this area confirm this issue that trustworthy and reliable is an important key in the relationship. Researchers provide a survey to rank factors of retain a relationship. Finally, the results show approximately 90 percent of attendants declares trustworthy is very important key and telling lie ruin the relationship. Although, some people believe that for keeping up a relationship, sometimes we need to tell a white lie in order to cover our mistake but it is better avoid making any mistakes. In approaching the issue, apart from that mentioned above, another equality important reasons why I choose to be honest in the relationship is psychological effects on the liars. To elucidate this point, when someone starts telling small lies, he must continue the lies and maybe create a circular of lie. In other word, this kind of person is always under stress about their pervious lies and not forgetting their details. For example, I was member of a group at university two years ago. There was a liar in our group and she always tell lie about her works and homeworks. On day she forgot her lie that told us and she said something completely in contrast to her story that told us as an excuse. Therefore, we omitted her from our groups. So, lairs are under pressure and nobody does not accept a liar in their groups. To wrap it up, all aforementioned arguments lead us to conclusion that the telling truth creates a firm relationship between people and they can rely on each other and do their duties so perfects. Actually, there are other reasons and examples, challenging the claims, which are not mentioned above. All in all, it is highly recommend that people must be honest during their life in order to have best relationship with others.
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of humanity, being honest with
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in our
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has been a key factor in our social life which is much talked about not
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by sociologists
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also
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other
open- minder citizens. It has been
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hard
to reach a consensus about whether
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people
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tell
truth or
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lie
in their life and every situation.
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,
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telling
the
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lie
is
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abnormal and ruins the
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relationship
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so
you cannot
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fix
it again. From my
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perspective, the statement is true, I
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with
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and I explicate my primary reasons through the following paragraphs.

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first
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equisetic
point that deserved to
be mentioned
is that about creating truthful and reliable
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relationship
between
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people
.
Generally
speaking, most
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people
tend to have
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relationship
with someone who does not
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tell
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lie
and is
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so
reliable person.
In addition
, the core of all firm
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relationship
is based
on trustworthy. The noteworthy relevant refreshing
intelligently
statistics in this area confirm this issue that trustworthy and reliable is an
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important
key in the
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relationship
. Researchers provide a survey to rank factors of retain a
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relationship
.
Finally
, the results
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show
approximately 90 percent of attendants declares trustworthy is
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very
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important
key and
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telling
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lie
ruin the
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relationship
. Although,
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some
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people
believe that for keeping up a
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relationship
,
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we need to
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tell
a white
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in order to cover our mistake
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it is better avoid making any mistakes.

In approaching the issue, apart from that mentioned above, another equality
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important
reasons why I choose to be honest in the
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relationship
is psychological effects on the liars. To elucidate this point, when someone
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starts
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telling
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small
lies, he
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must
continue the lies and maybe create a circular of
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lie
. In
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word, this kind of person is always under
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stress
about their
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pervious
lies and not forgetting their
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details
.
For example
, I was member of a group at university two years ago. There was a liar in our
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group and
she always
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tell
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lie
about her works and
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homeworks
. On
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day she
forgot her
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lie
that
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told
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us and
she said something completely
in contrast
to her story that
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told
us as an excuse.
Therefore
, we omitted her from our groups.
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So
, lairs are under pressure and nobody does not accept a liar in their groups.

To wrap it up, all aforementioned arguments lead us to conclusion that the
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telling
truth creates a firm
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relationship
between
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people and
they can rely on each
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other
and do their duties
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so
perfects. Actually, there are
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other
reasons and examples, challenging the claims, which are not mentioned above. All in all, it is
highly
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recommend
that
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people
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must
be honest during their life in order to
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have best
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relationship
with others.
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IELTS essay Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v. 867

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
456 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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