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do you agree or disagree with the following statement? parents are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr. v.804

parents are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr. v. 804
That education of children plays an important role in both life and future of the the children is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the signeficance of parents in the education situation of children, we will ponder over the educated children in the past and now much more scrupulusly. the effect that parnents have in education of children have been recently the topic debate among experts. I believe that nowadays, parennts much more influenced in the education of children than the past. and these are my justification, To begin with, a lot of parents are educated. because the policy of the goverment decided in 20 years ago, we can see that parents have university degree or at least were gradueted from hischool. for example, when I ask my father weather his parents observed in his education my he say that " my parents did not know I went to school or not" . However, my parents are going to my school regularly and they are talking with my teachers and they know my situation in the school, therefore parents have observence over the education of children. The second reason Why I advocate this point of vie liaising the fact that parents have a lot of concerns about the future of the children. parents want their children to have wealthy life in the futuer and the know that nowadays, creating a good life because econnemy situation is realy hard. for example, last week my aunts talked each other and topic of them was the education of their children, on the other hand, I never heard my grand father speak about the education of children so I can concud the education of childrent is more important in the present than the past. at least but not the least parents have less kids the the past. i makes parent able to creat better situation for childrien. for instance, once I talked my granfather about my father he said a memorise about my dad then my dad said that this memorise was about my ant. not only did he not remmeber the exactly but also he did not know he had how children. therefore, the number of children makes parents can not involve in the education of their. Having discussion this point the from tha point of perspective. I would rather look at it from another view as well, we can not see the parent are invoved the education of children as whole because there were few of parents that they tried to observe the education of children. altuough, these parent exiested, the number of them is much more than the past. so we can ignore them. By taking all above-mentioned argumants into consideration the following conclusion can be drown about the issue. understimating the infuence of parents over the education of children not logical. attending the issue, meticulously, contribute to agreeing witt statment that parents are involved in the education of their children much more than the past.
That
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the the
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is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the
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signeficance
of
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parents
in the
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education
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situation
of
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children
, we will ponder over the educated
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children
in the
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past
and
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now
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much
more
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scrupulusly
.
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the
effect that
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parnents
have in
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education
of
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children
have been recently the topic debate among experts.

I believe that nowadays,
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parennts
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much
more influenced in the
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education
of
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children
than the
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.
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and
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with,
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parents
are educated
.
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because
the policy of the
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goverment
decided in 20 years ago, we can
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see
that
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parents
have university degree or at least were
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gradueted
from
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hischool
.
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for
example, when I ask my father weather his
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parents
observed in his
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education
my he say that
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; my
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parents
did not
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know
I went to school or
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not&quot
;
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, my
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parents
are going to my school
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regularly and
they are talking with my
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teachers and
they
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my
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in the school,
therefore
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parents
have
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observence
over the
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education
of
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children
. The second reason Why I advocate this point of vie liaising the fact that
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parents
have
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a lot of
concerns about the future of the
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children
.
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parents
want their
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children
to have wealthy life in the
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futuer
and the
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know
that nowadays, creating a
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good
life
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because
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econnemy
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situation
is
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realy
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hard
.
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for
example, last week my aunts talked each other and topic of them was the
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education
of their
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children
,
on the other hand
, I never heard my grand father speak about the
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of
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children
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so
I can
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concud
the
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of
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childrent
is more
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in the present than the
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.
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at
least
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not the least
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parents
have
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less
kids
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the the
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past
.
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i
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makes
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able to
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creat
better
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for
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childrien
.
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for
instance, once I talked my
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granfather
about my father he said
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a memorise
about my dad then my dad said that
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this memorise
was about my ant.
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did he not
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children
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therefore
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children
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makes
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parents
can not involve in the
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education
of their.

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from
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tha
point of perspective. I would
rather
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as well
, we can not
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the
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are
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the
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as whole
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that they tried to observe the
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altuough
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exiested
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so
we can
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them.

By taking all above-mentioned
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argumants
into consideration the following conclusion can be
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drown
about the issue.
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understimating
the
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infuence
of
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parents
over the
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education
of
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children
not logical.
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attending
the issue,
meticulously
, contribute to agreeing
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witt
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statment
that
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parents
are involved
in the
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education
of their
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children
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14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
66Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
52Mistakes

IELTS essay parents are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. use specific reason and examples to support your ansewr. v. 804

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
495 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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