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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for colleagues or classmates to communicate in person than through emails in order to do a project. v.769

It is better for colleagues or classmates to communicate in person than through emails in order to do a project. v. 769
The communication among the team members is a fundamental factor for doing a project. There is a list of way to communicate such as the face to face or email. While some people are convinced to use the email to exchange their idea with the team; others, on the other hand, prefer to have a face to face interaction. I personally agree with the first belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective. The first reason which advocates my outlook is that the team members are accessible anytime with the email. In fact, the usage of the email eliminates the time restriction. The team members are capable of exchanging their data even at night. This situation provides an appropriate condition for preparing the project especially during the time near the due date. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the issue, is my own instance. When I was an architecture student, I had to do the lots of my final projects in the group. One of these projects was the urban analysis which was really arduous, and it required an intense communication with the team members to cover whole required aspects. Besides, we had a limited span for the presentation; thereby we did the big portion of the project at home. In this condition, the email was a primary resource for communication which made the team members to be available and participated in the debate as they are far apart. The second clue which embraced my idea is that the email demolishes the meeting arrangement difficulties. It is evident as a crystal that the agreement for the group meeting is a hard task since each team members possesses a particular schedule differed from others' program. Therefore, finding the fixed time when total team members are free is a challenging situation. However, the utilization of the email omits this problem. The team members are accessible as they are accountable for the private issue. According to the noteworthy, intelligent survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-five percent of bosses in the Tehran prefer to use the internet chat to participate in the meeting exerted at the far away location. Consequently, they are able to observe the company' s function and participate in the meeting at the identical time. Nevertheless, some people may assume that the face to face connection have the few failures as the team members provide the solution for others' problem as soon as possible they face. They overlook this subtle point that the in the well-defined team program, which each is aware of his or her responsibility or duty, demands less advice to cope with his or her duty. Moreover, just by one message he or she can inform the entire groups about the emergency situation and ask for help. To wrap it up, based on the whole aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the email is the decent primary of the communication between the team members. The email eliminates the restriction of time, and there is no problem with the team arrangement. All in all, I highly recommend the usage of the email for the group project which leads to the best outcome.
The
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communication
among the
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team
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members
is a fundamental factor for doing a
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project
. There is a list of way to communicate such as the
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face
to
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face
or email. While
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some
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people
are convinced
to
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use
the email to exchange their
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idea
with the
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team
; others, on the
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other
hand, prefer to have a
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face
to
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face
interaction. I
personally
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agree
with the
first
belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.

The
first
reason which advocates my outlook is that the
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team
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members
are accessible anytime with the email. In fact, the usage of the email eliminates the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
restriction. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
are capable of exchanging their data even at night. This situation provides an appropriate condition for preparing the
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project
especially
during the
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time
near the due date. A vivid example can be
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given
to shed light on the issue, is my
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own
instance. When I was an architecture student, I had to do the lots of my final
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projects
in the
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group
. One of these
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projects
was the urban analysis which was
really
arduous, and it required an intense
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communication
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
to cover whole required aspects.
Besides
, we had a limited span for the presentation; thereby we did the
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big
portion of the
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project
at home. In this condition, the email was a primary resource for
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communication
which made the
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team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
to be available and participated in the debate as they are far apart.

The second clue which embraced my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
is that the email demolishes the
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meeting
arrangement difficulties. It is evident as a crystal that the agreement for the
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group
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meeting
is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
task since each
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team
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members
possesses a particular schedule differed from
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others&
#039; program.
Therefore
, finding the
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fixed
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time
when total
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team
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members
are free is a challenging situation.
However
, the utilization of the email omits this problem. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
are accessible as they are accountable for the private issue. According to the noteworthy, intelligent survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-five percent of bosses in the Tehran prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the internet chat to participate in the
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meeting
exerted at the far away location.
Consequently
, they are able to observe the
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company&
#039; s function and participate in the
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meeting
at the identical time.

Nevertheless
,
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some
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people
may assume that the
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face
to
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face
connection have the few failures as the
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team
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members
provide the solution for
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others&
#039; problem as
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soon
as possible they
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face
. They overlook this subtle point that the in the well-defined
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team
program, which each is aware of
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his or her
responsibility or duty, demands less advice to cope with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
his or her
duty.
Moreover
,
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just
by one message he or she can inform the entire
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groups
about the emergency situation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

To wrap it up, based
on the whole
aforementioned reasons, one can
logically
draw the conclusion that the email is the decent primary of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
members
. The email eliminates the restriction of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, and there is no problem with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
arrangement. All in all, I
highly
recommend the usage of the email for the
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group
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
which leads to the best outcome.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
53Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay It is better for colleagues or classmates to communicate in person than through emails in order to do a project. v. 769

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
544 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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