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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is time we all relied less on private motor vehicles to get around, and instead used other forms of transport. Use specific examples and details to support your answer. v.644

It is time we all relied less on private motor vehicles to get around, and instead used other forms of transport. Use specific examples and details to support your answer. v. 644
For many years private transportation has been serve for people not only as a tool to commute, but also as a sorce of comfort. I personally disagree with the statement that people now rely less on private motor vehicles. The reasons why I hold this stance will be elaborated in the paragraphs below. One of the reason is that even in some parts of the world people do not have any alternative to the private vehicles. For instance, thos who live in the contry side of the United Stated simply are lack of any kind of transportation to substitute their own cars. There is no evolved public trantportation system. If the government sponsors development of the public transportation in these areas, people will have more opportunities to move around. Dispite on some advantages of using private cars, busses could help people in situations when the own vehicles cannot be used, such as when it breaks down. To that end, certain groups of people in particular regions still depend on private vehicles tremendously. Another reason is that people like comfort, which private motor vehicles are enable to provide. Modern cars have a myriad of technology, which let people to enjoy driving. For example, all modern cars include air-conditioners for mantaining temperature regiment, GPS- systems for navigating in the unfamiliar for a driver areas. Therefore, complectation of the contemporare motor vehicles makes the driving process marvelously pleasant, forcing people to purchace even more cars. If people give up on their own cars, they will lose these comfortable conditions, providing by cars. Although scores of social programs are for decreasing using private vehicles in order to protect our planet from pillutants, people continue driving their own cars in the same degree. So, advantageous of using private cars overweight advantageous of using public transportation. To recapitulate, I feel that nowadays frequenty of using private motor vehicles by humans is still enormous. This is because some areas are lack of other tipes of transportation and own cars provide people with highly comfortable and enjoyable conditions.
For
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transportation
has been serve for
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people
not
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only
as a tool to commute,
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but
also
as a
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sorce
of comfort. I
personally
disagree with the statement that
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people
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now
rely less on
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private
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motor
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vehicles
. The reasons why I hold this stance will
be elaborated
in the paragraphs below.

One of the reason is that even in
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some
parts of the world
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people
do not have any alternative to the
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private
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vehicles
.
For instance
,
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thos
who
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live
in the
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contry
side of the United Stated
simply
are lack of any kind of
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transportation
to substitute their
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own
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cars
. There is no evolved public
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trantportation
system. If the
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government
sponsors development of the public
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transportation
in these areas,
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people
will have more opportunities to
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move
around.
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on
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some
advantages of using
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private
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cars
, busses could
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help
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people
in situations when the
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own
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vehicles
cannot be
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used
, such as when it breaks down. To that
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end
, certain groups of
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people
in particular
regions
still
depend on
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private
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vehicles
tremendously
.

Another reason is that
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people
like comfort, which
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private
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motor
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vehicles
are
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enable
to provide. Modern
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cars
have a myriad of technology, which
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let
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people
to enjoy driving.
For example
, all modern
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cars
include air-conditioners for
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mantaining
temperature regiment, GPS- systems for navigating in the unfamiliar for a driver areas.
Therefore
,
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complectation
of the
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contemporare
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motor
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vehicles
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makes
the driving process
marvelously
pleasant, forcing
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people
to
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purchace
even more
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cars
. If
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people
give up on their
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own
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cars
, they will lose these comfortable conditions, providing by
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cars
. Although scores of social programs are for decreasing using
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private
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vehicles
in order to protect our planet from
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pillutants
,
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people
continue driving their
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own
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cars
in the same degree.
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So
, advantageous of using
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private
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cars
overweight advantageous of using public transportation.

To recapitulate, I feel that nowadays
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frequenty
of using
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private
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motor
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vehicles
by humans is
still
enormous. This is
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because
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some
areas are lack of other
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tipes
of
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transportation
and
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own
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cars
provide
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people
with
highly
comfortable and enjoyable conditions.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
47Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay It is time we all relied less on private motor vehicles to get around, and instead used other forms of transport. Use specific examples and details to support your answer. v. 644

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
340 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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