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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in the past were more interested in improving their neighborhood (the area where they live) than now v.244

People in the past were more interested in improving their neighborhood (the area where they live) than now v. 244
The books are an enormous source of knowledge which is nowadays transformed its appearance from traditional paper-based to digital form known as e-books. The majority of people believe that it is an advanced mode of reading books with certain positive points. However, others think that e-books are not the proper way of gaining knowledge, paper books are still the best learning or reading material compared to digital books. To begin with, from the last four decades books were changed from paper-based to digital one. In the modern era of technology most of the people using mobile phones, tablets and computers in order to work at the office, watching movies and reading newspaper or e-books. If we consider the fact in terms of money and convenience digital form is the best suitable way of reading books. In addition to this, the e-books are easily transferable and can be used anywhere on any device. To illustrate, these days due to certain benefits of e-books, 75% of the population prefers e-books over paper books compare to 20th century, according to a survey conducted by BBC news. On the contrary, It is a non-deniable fact that still there are a group of people who prefers paper-based books. The main reason for this is, as of today all the books are not available in digital form such as ancient books. The digital forms have significant downsides that result in strain on eyes if, e-books were used for an extended period of time which normally people do while reading. For instance, with reference to the continuation of BBC news survey in which, they interviewed around one million people around the globe and outcomes were a selective group of people used to enjoy reading a traditional paper-based book and newspaper over morning or evening tea/coffee time. Even after the technological advancement, there are people who still prefer the old way of reading books which cannot be replaced by any means. To conclude, E-books and paper books have their own benefits and limitations which defers person to person. E-books are now trending in the 21st century where more and more people are started using it, nevertheless, all the books are not available as of now. Paper books are the traditional way of reading which cannot be replaced 100% by digital form even after considering its downsides.
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books
are an enormous source of knowledge which is nowadays transformed its appearance from traditional paper-based to digital
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form
known as e-books. The majority of
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people
believe that it is an advanced mode of
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reading
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books
with certain
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positive
points.
However
, others
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think
that e-books are not the proper way of gaining knowledge, paper
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books
are
still
the best learning or
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reading
material compared to digital books.

To
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begin
with, from the last four decades
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books
were
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changed
from paper-based to digital one. In the modern era of technology most of the
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people
using mobile phones, tablets and computers in order to work at the office, watching movies and
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reading
newspaper or e-books. If we consider the fact in terms of money and convenience digital
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form
is the best suitable way of
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reading
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books
.
In addition
to this, the e-books are
easily
transferable and can be
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used
anywhere on any device. To illustrate, these days due to certain benefits of e-books, 75% of the population prefers e-books over paper
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books
compare to 20th century, according to a survey conducted by BBC news.

On the contrary
, It is a non-deniable fact that
still
there are a
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of
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people
who prefers paper-based
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books
. The main reason for this is, as of
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today
all the
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books
are not available in digital
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form
such as ancient
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books
. The digital
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forms
have significant downsides that result in strain on eyes if, e-books were
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used
for an extended period of time which
normally
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people
do while
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reading
.
For instance
, with reference to the continuation of BBC news survey in which, they interviewed around one million
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people
around the globe and outcomes were a selective group of
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people
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used
to enjoy
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reading
a traditional paper-based
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book
and newspaper over morning or evening tea/coffee time. Even after the technological advancement, there are
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people
who
still
prefer the
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old
way of
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reading
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books
which cannot
be replaced
by any means.

To conclude
, E-books and paper
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books
have their
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own
benefits and limitations which defers person to person. E-books are
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now
trending in the 21st century where more and more
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people
are
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started
using it,
nevertheless
, all the
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books
are not available as of
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now
. Paper
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books
are the traditional way of
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reading
which cannot
be replaced
100% by digital
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form
even after considering its downsides.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay People in the past were more interested in improving their neighborhood (the area where they live) than now v. 244

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
388 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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